Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to a different kind of fat burning methods that people use. While it is possible to claim that a balanced diet is a more important factor for a healthy life, my point of view that the continues exercise provides more benefits. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analysing both sides of the argument to a great extent.
First and foremost, there is mydaid of benefits a person can gain from continues exercising such as quality of life, self-motivation, self-integrity, health security, and availability. On the other hand, this will remove our obesity also. For example, most of the Chinese people have been addicted to exercising and they are strong in mentally as well as physically. Therefore, it is strongly believed that exercising as the best way to control the health of any species.
On the other hand, those who believed the other side of the argument have a different point of view and say a balanced diet provides more strong health feeling without wasting the time. For instance, most the Australian women control their diet throughout the day to protect their body shapes. But, without adding vitamins and minerals into the body, a persons’ body and mind can be weaker.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that exercising is the best practice while taking enough food into the body. In nutshell, it is expected that the government’s and the professionals will take cognitive actions to protect society while providing the education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04868913858 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86330016681 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1132944158 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.25397266985 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251994282553 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818647960696 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682842506728 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136845825143 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450376377432 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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