Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In this world, young children playing sport have enormous vision in terms of have a fit body, exercise, career, passion and mentor. Some People believe to play sports is very advantage and other think it disturbs their studies and other activities. This essay will discuss why play sport is important and conclude the advantages overweight the disadvantages.
Firstly, Child like the play and participate to win the game. There are numerous pros for child who play sports. In competitive world, child's body must be fit and must have balance mind. Game provides fitness which balance the immunity system. Playing in team always gives benefits in terms of management skills, sharp mind, team cooperation. Playing sport is vital booster to discipline of individual. As a result children behaves in discipline manner to their parents. Young age is appropriate age to join any game. For example , Sachin Tendulakar started to play in young age and he became legend of cricket. Sports is not giving skills but it gives team spirits which is provide courage not to give up.
Secondly, despite of numerous advantages, disadvantages exists until itinerary doesn't follow with timely. Overplay on daily basis means wastage of time, that results into legging of study. Profound of overconfidence in any sports can give you health injury. Balancing the sport and study is very crucial to deal with time.
To recapitulate, Advantages of sports in individual life always provide success window in health and wealth. I would recommend that young age is superb age to learn game which may give you direction for your career. Last but not least, playing a sport in tournament means you are dedicated, refined and enthusiastic to your goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13523131673 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65004676368 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6647014983 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.15 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.05 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 6.9802955665 215% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127860440964 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376671460626 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343922972147 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804217804245 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375926335529 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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