Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are the role models for many youngsters. Do you agree/Disagree ?
The modern world is changing at the very fast pace. The choices and preferences of the people are also bound to change. Undoubtedly in these days, it is an irrefutable fact that celebrities whether it is sports star or movie star, are playing a pivotal role in shaping up the life of young generation. They get inspired with their life style and try to portray each and everything. I completely accord with the idea that the celebrities have casted a spell over the adolescents.
To start with the effect of successful film stars, the youth take over by the idea of maintaining the high lifestyle according to the film stars. They try to make their carer bright to raise their living standards. Moreover, the dressing style of celebrities is the most common thing that youth feel happy to copy. The graduates and high schools students are spell-bound by the hair style, attires and their luxury vehicles. For example, the hair style of Indian actor Salman Khan was mimic by many young generation in the nineties.
Furthermore, the sports stars also influence the thinking of common people. The youth take the road to struggle and hardships to stay fit and healthy after the footsteps of successful and hardworking sportsmen. The celebrities who win fame for their countries motivate the common youngsters to add feather to the cap of their nation. Besides, the charitable work done by the influential personalities kindle the flame of philanthropic works that is quite helpful for the society.
All in all, the media is playing a dominant role in making the youngsters the followers of celebrities. The negative aspects are also there as the youth start doing hero worshipping but everyone should follow the right path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98269896194 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7211843544 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 12.0 1.56157635468 768% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3067537258 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159027978967 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416601473097 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549439643836 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084798242475 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252478897901 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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