Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily invention. Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
In recent era, humanity encountered several inventions who made their way into human life style but the most stupendous one is a smart phone. This invention made us think and act efficiently as compared to other inventions. Every invention has its own merits and demerits. I am convinced that smart phone made our lives so comfortable that our ancestors never dreamed. The essay will further elaborate the reasons and explanations to choosing this invention over other inventions.
At the outset, myriad conspicuous reasons can be brought up to justify that smart phones brought a revolution in human life style. The preponderant explanation lies in the fact that smart phone is multitask operational machine, which can operate various function at the same time. Smart phones made it more convenient for human to communicate visually regardless the geological location.
Another key justification to prioritize smart phone is that it has ample features like calculator, navigation, social networking sites, and many more. These features assist us in our daily life to act instantly and save time. The portability and small size of this invention aid us to carry it anywhere we like.
Precisely analysing the facts, I would like to encapsulate that advantages of smart phone apparently outweigh its few of the limitations which can be strategically addressed.
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...on aid us to carry it anywhere we like. Precisely analysing the facts, I would l...
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...s which can be strategically addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34418604651 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96470676607 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632558139535 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7980446393 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0851810679929 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377539770765 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428006170995 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465116646281 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529262400138 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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