The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is theproblem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?

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The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the
problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?

In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to job leaves and individual life. While it is possible to claim that life is for work, my point of view that the work is for life. Therefore, every employee should take the maximum of leaves. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analysing different sides of the argument to a greater extent.
First and foremost, there are myriad of benefits a nation can gain from stress free employee life such as confidentiality, availability, integrity, security, life encapsulation, work verification, work validation and proper life quality. For example, the United States have implemented new rule set for the employers to protect workers such as over work and job leaves. Therefore, it is accepted by the professionals that the leaves should not be banded for employees.
On the other hand, for strong family relationships and extended family relationships leaves are very important. For example, a long travel cannot complete with in one day in India; therefore, few days needs to take as annual leaves to visit the family or parents for an employee. Otherwise, he or she cannot visit their family for a long time.
In conclusion, it is believed by the scientist that the personal life is essential for a person for their education and family relationships. In nut shell, the governments and the professionals should implement strong international laws and regulations for all workers and students in this monopoly market.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98013595783 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56640625 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4683374004 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218343903505 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776262048666 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430914259252 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123428749368 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125284049265 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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