tobacco

Essay topics:

tobacco

Cigarettes, which are mainly used in tobacco, is one of the most common drug used all over the world. A huge numbers of people around the globe , specially young generation is too much addicted for it and off course long term cost on health issue is another challenge not just for smokers themselves, but the community itself have to bear the cost and took responsibility.

However, government legitimate actions can also play vital role in terms of reducing this addiction with various policies and strict laws.

First of all any drug either its cigar or cigarette, both are dangerously penetrating in our lives and cigarettes are the most common now in our societies, specially too much increased in youngsters, who get addicted in a very early stage and ultimately get affected with many more diseases. As per survey globally, an NGO's figure out that there are almost billions of youngsters who start cigarette in just eighteen year and due to this immature time they get addicted in a brutal way.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... huge numbers of people around the globe , specially young generation is too much ...
^^
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a brutal way" with adverb for "brutal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to this immature time they get addicted in a brutal way.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 1207.87684729 69% => OK
No of words: 170.0 242.827586207 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92941176471 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67185552419 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723529411765 0.580463131201 125% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 379.143842365 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2868337425 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.6 104.977214359 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.9669160288 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0535549841363 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373621998104 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747243996209 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333723001379 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471955594627 0.0609392437508 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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