Travel is overrated today, because people can get the information without leaving home. Discuss whether travel should be conclusded as part of the quality education.
The topic of travelling to get the information without leaving home has become a heated debate among people. Although many people assert that there is no need to travel when all the information is available online, the others refute this proposition saying that it will excel people abilities in many ways. This essay will discuss why travelling is the most important part of people's life and reach a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of argument which found why travelling is fruitful for people in which the most preponderant one is that it will enhance interpersonal skills and abilities. People from different places and countries interact with each other and get a chance to exchange different norms and values. For instance, a study showed that about 80% of the people worldwide get to know each other's traditions through communication when meeting at different travelling places. Hence, travelling is a precursor to know about different cultures.
Another contributing factor would that it will help people to get relax from busy office routine and boost energy levels. People will feel fresh when contacted with natural views and this experience cannot be achieved by staying at the home. For instance, a survey revealed that the people who often travel are more productive than their counter peers. Apparently, travelling is a fundamental element in elevating people's mood.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the benefits of travelling in terms of getting knowledge and refreshing mind. Therefore, in my opinion, people should travel more often instead of sitting and watching beautiful places on television at home.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33590733591 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73351983853 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4864754636 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318142386516 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121680198386 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582031243783 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203879978957 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573782115825 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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