What are the advantages and disadvantages of mass communication in the present modern world?
The importance of the advantage and disadvantage of the mass communication in the present modern world, which has always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of argument in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrities has sparked controversy over the potential of this trends in an integral part of the society in recent years. It can be agreed that the upside if imitating celebrities are instruments indeed, however it has some various drawback as well. This essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provide well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the advantage of mass communication in the present modern world unreservedly salient, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that advantage. Therefore, it is vital time to appreciate both the significance of the mass communication in the presented in the world for the overall amelioration of society.
However, it has some people choose think differently and hold an opposing viewpoint, which can be certainly overwhelm substantial influence on the disadvantage of mass communication in the present modern world? Nevertheless, the contradiction is rooted in the fact that disadvantage. Hence, it is apparent that the downside of the disadvantage of mass communication in the present modern world cannot be ignored.
The above-presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of the advantage and disadvantages of mass communication in the present modern world. While it is evident it has various benefits, although its deleterious effect cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53937007874 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38788849515 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5593506078 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518886646427 0.242375264174 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203835008009 0.0925447433944 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200368491456 0.071462118173 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352126152963 0.151781067708 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089402450319 0.0609392437508 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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