"When it comes to money, people care more about fairness than equality."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
Everyone wants be fair when it comes to money as compared to be equal. This essay will discuss the reasons for being fair in the context of money than being equal.
On the one hand, individuals who really work hard should get paid fairly. The world is full of mix of people, some works hard while others do not. Two employees in an organization, for example, on similar position, one work hard and other do not then the one who is really devoted towards his work should get paid fair.Thus, being fair in terms of money actually motivate the hard workers to work in a more focused way.
While being fair when it comes to money is also a lesson for those who is lethargic. So many people wants to achieve higher in terms of money despite being less devoted towards their work. For instance, there are people in our society who want to earn money but do not want to put their hard work into it. Since, being fair inspire others who really doesn't want to work hard but want to be fairly treated in terms of money.
This essay discussed being fair in terms of money motivate hard working people to work more harder and inspire lethargic people of society to work hard. In my opinion, being fair in context of money is a proper way to treat fairly to both hard working and lethargic people .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o both hard working and lethargic people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, really, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48523206751 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16136757179 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485232067511 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7540348019 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156033139928 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857424577662 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546671696024 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121362179359 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508675852851 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 53.1260098522 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.