Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is argued by some that having to communicate in a non-native language at where you live can lead to not only social issues but also pratical issues. From my point of view, I strongly agree with this statement because of the troubles in expressing your thoughts and acquiring knowledge.
First of all, this is undeniable that finding hard to verbalize what is in your mind is one of the main reasons. This is because of the different between the way native speakers and language learners convey in particular contexts. For instance, Vietnamese teenager might not be able to use slang when chatting with other classmates in an informal conversation in English. This can lead to the widened gap between young generation and the lack of confidence in communication. This can also be seen that some older people can't order their drinks because the menu or label which weren't translated in their mother tongue.
Secondly, the other problems is the difficulty in obtaining information due to the low level fluency of the new language. This is exemplified by the affect directly on the effectiveness in understanding information when students attend a class which is taught in English. Another good example is when college students have to do a research involved Biology or Science subject, the shortage of understaing a wide range of academic vocabulary can obstruct them from finish their works as wanted.
In conclusion, I am convinced that social problem as well as practical problem are inevitable when attending an environment where speaking a foreign language is required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...can also be seen that some older people cant order their drinks because the menu or ...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
... drinks because the menu or label which werent translated in their mother tongue. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11583011583 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88301445278 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2772195505 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230602631116 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732412895266 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614465492641 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139315667556 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713885141334 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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