Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether students are more impacted by their teachers or not. While some people agree with this statement, I hold the opposite view. I believe that students are more influenced by their friends more than their teachers.
First of all, students tend to imitate their friend’s behaviors. They feel that friends are easy to represent their personalities and attitude. For example, I used to walk with my friend Yasser when I was at elementary school. He used to wear expensive clothes in order to pretend that he was wealthy. Actually, I liked his style, so I decided to imitate his style of wearing in order to have him as a friend. In the end, we were able to have strong relationship because we have the same clothes style. Indeed, friends used to copy each other in order to stay together.
Another important reason is that friends are easy to listen to each other. They spend several years together, so they build huge wall of trust. For instance, my friend Ahmed knew me since I was at intermediate school, so we know each other for more than ten years. He prefers to talk with me about all his secrets because he trusted me for several years. Apparently, friends like to hear each other because they trust each other.
Last but not least, friends have more influence on students because friends are the main way to make them happy. Students tend to enjoy their free time when they go out with their friends. For example, when I was student, I used to enjoy my weekend with my friends. They were able to change my mood and make me feel happy.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that students are more impacted by their friends more than their teachers. This is because not only they imitate their friend’s behaviors, but also they accept their idea and able to make them happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, first, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70858895706 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42926387418 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493865030675 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1869943089 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0952380952 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242997875723 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888024676792 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938022777773 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180277715413 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111140393387 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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