Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether parents today are more engaged in their children’s education or not. While some people believe that parents today are more involved to educate their children, I hold the opposite view. I think parents in the past are more engaged in their kid’s educational process.
To begin with, parents today have more than one job, so they do not have enough time to see their kids. The difficulty of life expense makes most parents to work for more than one career. For example, my father works in two different companies today because the first company gives him only $2000 per month. As a result, he is not able to cover all my family expenses because we are a big family. He decided to work in other company to compensate all the expanses. Obviously, he does not have any time to check his kid’s homework or even talk with them. On the other hand, life in the past was very cheap, so parents can have only one job and were able to spend enough time to involve with their children in their education.
In addition to the difficulty of life today, the advent of technology makes children independent. They tend to do their homework and solve all math problems by using electronic devices. For instance, my nephew, today, uses the calculator to solve any math issue. He does not need any help from his parents. Unlike kids in the past, they are prone to ask help from their parents when they struggle with any math problems because of the lack of technology at that time.
Last but not least, the educational system is completely different today. It mainly depends on having kids most of the time in school without any parent’s involvement. For example, after 2002, the government of Saudi Arabia established an educational law that force all children in elementary school to stay in the school twelve hours. Kids have to do all their homework and any projects before they leave the school. Therefore, parents are not completely involved in this educational process.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents today are not involved in their children educational process. This is because today parents have many jobs, kids become dependent on technology, and the educational system forces parents to not involve in their children’s learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...olve in their children's learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91898734177 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61502689212 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483544303797 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3213114327 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3181818182 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354887482522 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122512603035 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944183452726 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235970988535 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905874076523 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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