Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every society desperately needs rules and regulations to live a better life. The absence of laws could lead to pathetic consequences, like, downright chaos where everybody starves of his rights and have a strong indignation of not being treated righteously. Therefore, laws have been designed with the first inception of society. But they evolve with the needs of society. As the society grows, like from a small town to a city or a country, the old laws are incapable of resolving the issues faced by the bigger and advanced society. Hence, laws cannot have the flexibility to encompass the variety of situations and should be amended to fulfill the requirements of the present times.
The primary reason behind the inflexibility of laws is that they are made by the human. And human does not only prone to errors but also is unable to foresee but the near future. For example, the legislators of the horse and buggy times could not even think of today’s automobiles while designing the laws of traffic. So, they made laws as per the demands of those times. As mentioned above, these laws are now just a mere history, and have nothing to do with the needs of the society. Similarly, the laws made upon the invention of automobiles are now going to become obsolete with the idea of self-driving car which demands the overall redesign of traffic rules. Same is the case of rules dealing the crimes. With the evolution of science, the criminal activities now have totally changed. The idea of cyber-crime and breach of security are inconceivable to law makers of past times. Hence, laws are made with intent to cover the issues of the near future because human unfortunately got a myopic nature.
However, the flexibility of laws lies in its ability to be amended. The constitution of every country, and the rules and regulations of almost every organization, has been amended tremendously with the passage of time. It has been seen widely that the organizational laws about hiring and work procedure modify as per the incidents and their consequences experienced. Like, previously organizations usually hired on the basis of the technical requirements, but the need to communicate and manage the issues and tasks efficiently let the organizations decide the include these skills in their hiring process as well. Likewise, no one could refute the constitutional continual amendments which have been made after the discussion in the parliament. Hence, the laws can be modified and molded to enlarge the circular area of its coverings.
On the contrary, the laws made by the creator of the world are flexible enough to fulfill the needs of the mankind till the day of judgement. They have this elasticity for two reasons: firstly, they have been made the by the God without human intervention, secondly, they are quite fundamental. Like, it has been said in the book of Bible and Quran that alcohol is prohibited. So, all kinds of alcoholic beverages are covered by this basic rule.
In short, legislation is the primary need of society, but to make the error free and all time applicable law is impossible because human nature, that is why they have been made with the right of amendment in mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in short, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2671.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9462962963 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79922277573 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 873.9 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2098080883 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9259259259 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.62962962963 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126313615227 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385334844086 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300768722638 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704321943466 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292104278165 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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