Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Making a decision is a hard process for all people. While some people make their decision after carefully thinking, others make these decisions quickly. However, it is a very definite judgement that the decisions which are made quickly are always wrong. Therefore, I cannot fully agree or disagree with the given statement for two crucial reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason is that people may make a decision quickly through their experiences which were gained before since people do not need to think carefully while they are making a decision which have knowledge about it. For example, chief executive officer of business generally makes a decision quickly when an agreement will be signed because their business compete with other business. If they made a decision quickly, they would lose an agreement; moreover, this situation prevent business to make a profit. However, If they make decision quickly, result of this decision do probably not wrong because CEOs have trained for many years, and they know what to do. That is way, people should not say that The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong.
Second of all, there are some important decisions, which takes longer time to take because it may change one' life forever. For instance, one may think to pick a cigarette for enjoyment, after a while he shows interest to pick another one, by the end of the day he may have the whole pack which leads to cancer. Before picking the first one, the person must think of it once or twice before taking the decision.
To sum up, I do not both agree and disagree that the decision which are made quickly by people are always wrong for two significant reasons which I explained in the essay.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88926174497 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34325521593 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513422818792 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7590227382 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360728000162 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149543899049 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091912445521 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23933504169 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137863504807 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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