Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is believed since the advent of civilization that working has influenced the majority of people in this world a lot than in the past. As the growth of competition in many countries' companies; as a consequence, our dairy routines are automatically involved in the work. However, other people may prefer working for 3 days in such a long period but in my opinion, I would rather choose to work for 5 days in short hours for several reasons which will be elucidated in this essay.
First of all, the faster you finish your work, the much independence you have got. due to the fact that the minority of people are not satisfied with staying in the workplace for a long time for various reasons; hating a fussy boss who always put a great pressure, having hostile colleagues, and so forth. Similarly to the animal, which is cooped up in the cage, has no freedom to go anywhere. For example, my father once worked in the industry as an employee had not a good time in his workplace because of being teased by his friends in a variety ways like not informing important information and fabricating the story to besmirch him. Finally, he decided not to resign his job but requesting his boss to work only certain hours and compensate the rest of hours by working in a weekend. Therefore, it is much better to keep yourself away from unavoidable situations.
Secondly, By working in a short time could really beneficial to you in some ways. when you finish your work, you could quickly head back to your house to see the beloved people who waiting for you to come back. In comparison to working 3 days for a long time, which would probably cover the night shift, might have no chance to meet your family. Moreover, it could be detrimental to your health as well if you concentrate too much on your work. the main consequence of working late would be not getting a good sleep, which is really harmful to your health and you will get ill so easily because it could worsen your immune system; protect you from various diseases. For instance, there are some celebrities working for a large amount of money without caring for its consequence at all. finally, those who work hard too much were infected by serious diseases like bile cancer, lung cancer and so on. furthermore, they had no chance to utilize this huge money to travel anywhere or do something that they desire. It is better to put an emphasis on yourself than the work.
In summary, working for 5 days in a short time could be far better than 3 days for whole time for the reasons that shunning the bad conditions in the workplace, and having more opportunities to meet the beloved ones as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in short, in summary, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58193277311 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.545992273 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0137003423 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.789473684 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0526315789 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3157894737 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336385299797 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104269350181 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719731831905 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219223997545 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169888223034 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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