Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The reading states that global warming is the main reason for decline in the arctic deer on islands in Canada's acetic region. The author has not given strong evidences that fortify the above statement. above evidence can be easily proved to be fallacious.
global warming is main problem in today's time. it has lead to increase in temperature of earth. if the author would have given the actual temperature in the arctic region of Canada in all the season of past and present year then we could find out the effect of global warming in that region. it is not vivid from above statements that global warming has melted ice of island. However, it might be valid for summer season but during winter season temperature may fall back even to minus degree.
The author mention that acertic deer were decreasing and it was reported by local hunter themselves, decline in the number of deer may be because of the augment in the number of local hunters in the island. also, not only local hunter but poachers from outside the island be involved in poaching, as animal skin has high value in market. but, nothing has been mention about hunting condition of the island.
also deer propagate throughout the year in warm and in cold. may be during summer dear propagate to other place causing number to decrease and may return in winter when the sea is cover with ice; local hunter may report at the time when deer are out from island to other places. if author has mention the actual trend of propagation in the island then it would have been more relevant.
author has assert that only due to global warming deer population has decreased. if author would have mention in detail how it has actual affected the way of migration leading to decline in then number of deer population, it would have been more authentic or appropriate.
In sum, author's statement is not at all relevant to say that global warming is causing decrease in deer population. author has to give more data about the place and also diffferent evidence to fortify the statement.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1651 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.625 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.25 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.005 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.469 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 55.5748502994 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 357.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75630252101 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32299875919 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453781512605 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5607601048 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18842183767 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685100563746 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627748743471 0.0701772020484 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101688786746 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485326305274 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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