Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.Write a response in which you discuss the

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Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

People in positions of power have usually been revered throughout history--rulers, politicians, and even CEOs. Often, however, those in power are worn down by the struggles of bureaucracy and disorganization and become more cynical in their views and ideas. Hence, some people would argue that those in power should step down after five years because revitalization through new leadership is necessary for sustained success. I largely agree with this claim because not only can power cloud a person's judgement, but left unchecked, it can also foster greed and corruption. While it is plausible that some long-term goals require long-term leaders, ultimately, long-term leaders cause more harm than good. Thus, the best path to success is through short-term leaderships.
Firstly, cynicism is a byproduct of long-term power. While cynical views can sometimes be justified, they are not ideal for those in power. People in power should imagine the unimaginable and push their institutions towards a better place. The negative impacts of cynical leaders can be seen within the modern-day American political system. There is a lot of conflict between older Establishment Democrats and the newer, more-progressive Democrats about where the party is headed. While Establishment Democrats adamantly claim that proposals such as "Healthcare for All" and "The Green New Deal" are impossible, the more progressive Democrats, branded as ideologues, believe that they are in fact entirely possible. Perhaps if Establishment Democrats were able to consolidate their power forever, political arenas such as the environment and healthcare would not see much change. Thus, revitalization through new leadership is necessary to the success of any enterprise. Not only does new leadership provide fresh views and bold ideas, but it also challenges and checks those who are already in power.
Although short term-limits on positions of power encourage growth and sustained success of an enterprise, they also serve another equally important role. Short term-limits on power are vital in combatting greed and corruption. In countries such as Russia and Turkey where term-limits on the countries' rulers are either lax or nonexistent, corruption and greed has become rampant. The president of Russia, Putin, has used his power to enrich himself and his powerful friends by looting the people of Russia. The ruler of Turkey, Erdogan, has used his power to rig ostensibly Democratic elections to keep himself in power. In contrast, countries where presidential term-limits are more strictly adhered too such as Canada and the United States experience relatively less corruption. If short term-limits on political positions of power have proven to be successful, they should also be effective in combatting cynicism and corruption in any position of power.
However, the argument can be made that grand visions and long-term goals require long-term leaders to guide their way to fruition. For example, the president of China has been able to use his long-term power to implement largescale projects for his country’s benefit such as the Belt and Road initiative. Since there are no short term-limits in China, President Xinping can guarantee that he will see through it, the full implementation of the long and costly project. On the other hand, the former American president, President Obama could not guarantee the success of Obamacare because he could only hold office for no longer than eight years. As a result, his presidential successor has waged a war on Obamacare which is now in a very precarious situation. Even though these kinds of hurdles can come up because of short term-limits on power, they are a necessary evil because the alternative is authoritarian and totalitarian regimes and institutions such as China: Chinese citizens' human rights are constantly being violated by the ruling party because of their unabated power.
Power and positions of power are complex topics. Even though people have held positions of power for centuries, it is difficult to identify which exact components make a recipe for success. Nevertheless, one thing is for certain, long-term, unchecked power has often led a leader straight to failure: be it through cynicism, greed, or corruption. Hence, short term-limits on positions of power are vital to an institution's success. While it is difficult to quantify the definite amount of years a term-limit should be, it is certain that there must an enforceable term-limit at the very least. With the wealth gap and inequality on the rise globally, it is important, now more than ever, to be cognizant of issues such as the abuse of power and deal with it swiftly before it causes further harm down the road.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 493, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'institutions'' or 'institution's'?
Suggestion: institutions'; institution's
...s on positions of power are vital to an institutions success. While it is difficult to quant...
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Line 5, column 811, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e it causes further harm down the road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4012.0 2235.4752809 179% => OK
No of words: 747.0 442.535393258 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37081659973 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.22793465313 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98850234596 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 353.0 215.323595506 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472556894244 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1252.8 704.065955056 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4415603656 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.575757576 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60606060606 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183018530422 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593696282788 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682725891933 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119825916844 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050201164286 0.0667264976115 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 187.0 100.480337079 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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