Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Youth is basically the future of any nation. The young people and adolescents make a large portion of our society. They are the young people who have the most passion and energy in their selves. The youth, is marked by its dedication and dare if they want to achieve any dream. If pursuing a motive, they make it a matter of life and death if needed. There is no comparison of the youth with any other portion of the population.
Moreover, with the advancing society the horizons for progress and development have been vastly broadened for the youth. Today in all walks and domains of science and social development we see youth most fervently progressing and stepping ahead. Wether it is science, politics, social work, media, law and order, activism, medicine and health care, various armed and unarmed forces, it is the youth which is leading and impacting.
Furthermore, nowadays our society is becoming more advanced and broad minded and accepting. It is giving a chance to those topics and social issues which were a taboo subject in the past. Today there are so many important organizations, groups, societies involving youth as a majority. The impact of youth has profusely increased in decisions regarding any field they are progressively and actively involved in. The youth has become very well awared and responsible in so many fields.
There are so many important movements and decisions in the fields of medicine, politics, social work that was solely the result of relentless efforts of youth. The associations and organizations can turn any table over, with the unity an steadfastness. They have a power in their activism. They can intimidate any authority with their rebellious and fierce stance. For instance, the YDA- young doctor's association in my country has made so many formidable improvements and amendments with regard to the rights and privileges of doctors. Speaking of law and order, the young lawyers association has always been an actively involved organization in making so many improvements and amendments.
Conclusively, summing up the above discussion, i would strongly disagree with the statement that claiming young people today have no influence on important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, speaking of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17711171662 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84114272865 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8201650842 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4761904762 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192991295464 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586606233185 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089771285952 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145213233927 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145490365484 0.0645574589148 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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