People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement "People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers" might not always hold true.
There are many situations, where the decisions need to be taken based on logic only. For example, if one is surrounded by a group of robbers, instead of shouting in fear which would lead to much dangerous consequences. One should smartly think of a way to inform the police.
There are also many situations, where the decision needs to be taken based on emotions only. For example, in a family, there might be many circumstances where there is a possibility of misunderstandings, but instead of introspecting the situation by logic, if one believes in their feelings, then the trust or love would help avoid such misunderstandings.
However, there are many such situations also, where both logic and emotion are necessary. Both need to work synchronously. But I think making decisions solely based emotion and then justifying it logically has both pros and cons.
It is a pro when the emotions are genuine and right and when one believes the decision one took is right. The kind of justification one gives to the other person not only depends on the speaker but also on the listener. This is because, one can only understand ones emotions if they are in their shoes. So instead to explaining the emotional aspect, people tend to justify their actions logically.
But it is a con if the emotions are not right or dangerous. For example, if a person murders someone because his rage upon him, then justifying that action logically or emotionally still makes him a murderer.
Therefore, I conclude that not every decision should be taken by emotions. But no matter how hard one tries to use logic in every decision they make, there are some decisions which are taken by emotions. But if one takes every decision based on emotion, then the resulting consequences may make them poor decision makers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...his is because, one can only understand ones emotions if they are in their shoes. So...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88461897704 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492447129909 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7973671772 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9444444444 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331480029364 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108101991786 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108552308906 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178396618432 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121735729679 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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