Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is to important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Information is the resolution of uncertainty and it has irrefutable effect on society. To bring up the well-being of the society sharing information is really important. So many people thinks that information should be shared drastically as this is a crucial element for uplifting any scientific research, business or academic world. However, some people argue that there are some information which are too confidential and sharing those information can lead to any unauthorized intervention. I tend to believe that people should know about the limitation of information and share only those portions that could be beneficial for the society.
Information is the main tool behind every thoughtful actions and it consists of valuable data which are definitely necessary for more pragmatic scientific approach. Researchers spend precious hours of their life to prove a theoretical approach. To have a practical result they need to have control over as many information as possible. Similarly, in field of education, teachers need to enlighten their students with their knowledge regarding to a relevant topic. Suppose a teacher is giving lectures about a particular continent. It is her duty to share as much information as she possesses to provide data about the diverse culture of that place, as well as behaviour of citizens, indigenous language that are being persisted for centuries. Thus student can acquire profound knowledge about that continent.
Contrarily, some of these information are confidential enough and sharing those information can damage the society. Consequently,give the competitors an unfair advantage. Businesses own some information that are really private to the company. Such information may include trade secrets, sales, marketing plans, inventions, financial data and many more.Every country have their own defence system which can only be governed by bureaucrats. Any kind of illegitimate intervention may completely destroy the country.
To recapitulate, I think sharing information is imperative for well round of the society but restriction of information should also necessary to provide security from any detrimental effect to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
... which are too confidential and sharing those information can lead to any unauthorized interventi...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...esult they need to have control over as many information as possible. Similarly, in ...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...esult they need to have control over as many information as possible. Similarly, in field of edu...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...that are being persisted for centuries. Thus student can acquire profound knowledge ...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... that continent. Contrarily, some of these information are confidential enough and sharing tho...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...ion are confidential enough and sharing those information can damage the society. Consequently,gi...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , give
...ion can damage the society. Consequently,give the competitors an unfair advantage. Bu...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...nventions, financial data and many more.Every country have their own defence system w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, really, regarding, similarly, so, thus, well, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67584097859 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18512356288 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2945079244 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352025613287 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107005457762 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094000519654 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209500999056 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111287555587 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.