TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, in a sophisticated world have an organized life has turned into an essential issue during recent decades which has obliged schools' principals to add a relevant course in order to train more neat people who are able to plan their lives' events. Although a vast majority of people disagree with the fact that for coping with a complicated world, people have to be enabled to regulate their works and time, some others have a positive attitude toward the mentioned statement. As far as I'm concerned, I extremely support the stated thought. The reasons to reinforce my perspectives are declared hereunder.
The first and foremost reason for the aforementioned notion is that limitation of the time persuades the youngster to learn organizing manners. In other words, many aspects of life, which people are involved in, must be managed in order to meet the needs. If people don't have a distinct plan for the restricted hours of days, they will not be capable to complete all of the key steps which are necessary to be fulfilled. the management’s methods are being used in a wide range of projects in various subjects including political topics, engineering projects, educational researches, etc. For instance, for constructing a building, a well-known software called Primavera has been developed so as to schedule the works and the time of the tasks. Hence, for saving time and avoiding wasting it people should have a logical and rational plan in all facets of life.
Another conspicuous reason for the above-stated claim, which should be mentioned here, is that in order to be a prosperous person, the youth should organize their aims specifically in the technological world. Actually, for being successful young people should follow many smaller goals which force them to have a short-term plan. For example, for finding an appropriate position in a high-level university, students have to prepare a proper CV which is included articles, grades, and other futures. In this case, planning details of the major goal is counted as a fundamental phrase for juveniles. Thus, the youth should have practical strategies for achieving prosperity.
All in all, one cannot neglect the fact that in such as an intricate condition, it is vital for the people who are young to have the potentiality of programming. the hypothesize has turned into a crucial issue in modern societies. it will contribute people to spend their time and energy efficiency on the beneficial task which orients people to the prosperity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to organize
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Suggestion:
...ts people to the prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17718446602 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91268911733 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56067961165 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0424216087 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225012236279 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718648540212 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428402689364 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142278709467 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282445748728 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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