during a recent plane journey, you set next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
write a letter to this businessman. in your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Hiren,
I am writing this letter to apply for the job in your restaurants situated in Delhi.
Firstly, I would like to introduce myself. I am Hima Kacha, we met on 10 Oct 19 while travelling from Mumbai to Delhi in Air India flight. We were allocated seats beside each other and during our conversation you mentioned that I shall contact you when I am in need of job in any of your restaurant.
Recently, I have completed my degree in Hotel management from one of the renowned college in Mumbai. I would like to join a manager or assistant manager in any of the restaurants situated in Delhi. Moreover, I have done internship in Novotel Hotel in Mumbai for 6 months.
Although , I do not have much experience on managing but would be greatly if you lend me this opportunity for one of your restaurants in Delhi, as my family lives in Delhi. I hope you would make a wise decision.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Hima Kacha
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64204545455 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68319354394 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9126011259 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150423294096 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580425458775 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580385226171 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934478559267 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04230640484 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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