Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Traveling is one of the most enjoyable experiences for every person, so it is essential to be awesome. While some people prefer to travel with others, I believe that traveling alone is more appealing. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint and provide details to illustrate my perspective.
First and foremost, traveling alone is more flexible than traveling with a companion. When you are alone, you can decide individually, and you are not limited in many ways. People can have no schedules when they travel alone, and they can visit different places, and even if they want, they can stay more days in specific locations. My own personal experience is a compelling example of this. Two years ago I traveled to Europe in order to visit France and England, but after I visited Paris I was in love with the city and the atmosphere, so I stayed there for the rest of my holiday. If I went with a companion, I could not be able to change the plan by my self. This example demonstrates one of the benefits of traveling alone.
Furthermore, when you travel alone, you can spend more time with local people and get familiar with their culture. Going to distant countries is really an eye-opener since you learn more about other cultures and traditions, and when you are alone, you have more time to spend with local people. To be more specific, you can even attend their traditional events and rituals and learn from them, which would broaden your horizons and increase your awareness. For instance, As I mentioned in the above paragraph, I spent a long time in Paris. I stayed with one of the local people for some days in order to go to one of their traditional events. It was one of the most amazing things I have ever seen, and besides the great time I had, I learned many things about their culture.
In short, I strongly believe that traveling alone is preferable and fulfilling. This is because your plan is flexible, and because you have more time to spend with locals and to get familiar with their cultures and traditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, while, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6620498615 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5877736203 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479224376731 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8879761798 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31806144522 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108491883206 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874855480133 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201348399802 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274062634893 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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