In twenty years, there will be fewer cars than there are today.
n twenty years, there will be huge technological advancement on the transportation and on the thinking of the people. Thus, the number of cars in a road after twenty years will be strongly influenced by the technological advancement on car itself and the trend people chosing means for their transportation. I disagree with the statement that the number of cars will abate in twenty years. It is my firm belief that number of factors like technological advancement and rise of middle and lower class family will result in the incease in number of cars, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, advancement on the technology that is used to make car are advancing day by day. In recent years, there is been a lot of improvement in the manufacturing technologies and material science. As a result, price of a car is reducing per day. Along with it, car comapanies are using variety of accesssories that has increased the usability of cars. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, Tata company of India has made a car, Nano, which is the cheapest car in the market and costs less than a sports bike. This is clear to see why, many people got attracted to this car and we can see now many cars in the roads as people can easily afford them.
Secondly, the rise of middle and lower class family in terms of their pruchasing capacity is another reason for me to diagree with the statatement. The reduction on the price of cars simulatanously with the hike in purchasing capacity of people led many middle class family to buy cars rather than motorbikes or else for number of reasons, like safety, comfort et cetera. Drawing from my own personal experience, my family is a middle class family on our community. But, my father last year purchased a Polo - a SUV car under the brand of Volkswagen. Moreover, people of our neighbourhood are planning to buy new cars in a year or two. Consequently, we can clearly see our local road being densed with cars. This is the reason why I believe that there will be increase in the number of cars in days to come.
In the light of above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that there will be increase in the number of cars in twenty years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64215686275 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7660041988 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5570867524 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6842105263 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313331375436 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113726762936 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103045902816 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237135810196 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903598170341 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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