Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families. Help from the government is unnecessary.
In our sophisticated world, people may struggle with innumerable various problems in their lives, including personal, emotional, professional, financial, etc. difficulties. Some of those are solvable by them or with the help of their families and friends. However, I think that there are problems that required the government's assistance to be defeated. In the following paragraphs, I will explain two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
To begin with, these days, Lots of the challenges in people's lives are due to worldwide or nationwide disasters that can't be resolved without the help of the governments. It is too troublesome or even impossible for ordinary people to attempting to solve those major problems. For instance, many people are disturbed by air pollution, and one essential step to reduce it, is the development of public transportation, as one of the local government's duties. The other helpful step is taking action against global warming that needs an immense effort by governments all over the globe.
Another equally significant point is that some of the problems people confront are resulted in or can be solved only by changing the rules and regulations. Thus, people must ask for the government's support. My own experience is a compelling example demonstrates this fact. Two years ago, I lived in a friendly neighborhood. The biggest problem there was heavy traffic that was caused by inappropriate driving rules in the street close to the area. My neighbors and I decided to complain about it to the mayor. Therefore, we wrote a letter explaining the subject, then we signed it, and sent it to his office. A week later, the rules were modified and the traffic became lighter. Had we not asked the mayor to alter it, we would have to stand the traffic jam.
To make a long story short, I believe the government is responsible for assisting people with many obstacles they may face in their lives. Since some of them are too hard to be overcome by the usual people, and some are brought about by the government's laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...at there are problems that required the governments assistance to be defeated. In the follo...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... worldwide or nationwide disasters that cant be resolved without the help of the gov...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...other equally significant point is that some of the problems people confront are resulted i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06997084548 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93017564869 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2499625068 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5263157895 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247757791575 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642996896447 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636125591308 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149287595412 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626904555953 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.