TPO-27 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, having a good job is the ultimate goal of any individual. While some people believe that having a secure job is preferable, others believe that job satisfaction is the priority. Personally, I agree with the latter group. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, job satisfaction can result in an excellent feeling, power, and self-confidence for people. While every job has its advantages and disadvantages and people are dealing with the job, office atmosphere and colleagues every day, it is essential for them to feel satisfied in that everyday job. To explain more, since everyone has a special talent and improved in a specific skill, using these talents may result in satisfaction and self-confidence. My brother’s experience is a compelling example of this. Although he was very talented in computer and programming, after his graduation, he wanted to work in another field to have his job sooner. But I disagreed with him and compel him to wait for his favorite job. Finally, after some months, he started working in a software company. Doing his favorite job and being in that atmosphere made him sense achieving success, being prosperous and self-confident.
Secondly, people who are satisfied with their job will make all attempts to do their best, so they can achieve prosperity in the future and make more money. To clarify my points, any individual who works in what he likes will do all he can. This not only can improve his skills and enhance his salary but also can help the company he work in to improve and increase financial turnover. For instance, one of my friends stayed for an electrical engineering job that was his favorite and he didn’t accept the available math teaching at that time. After two months, he found the expected job and started his work as an electrical engineer. While he was satisfied with the job, he allocated long hours a day to that job and after two years he started managing an important project for the company and improved to an upper manager. If he had not waited for his favorite job, he would not have gained the position and salary.
In conclusion, I believe that waiting for the appropriate job that makes you satisfied is preferable. On one hand, it can make you feel powerful and self-confident and on the other hand, may result in more money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84520884521 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80251477567 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506142506143 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.211378247 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9047619048 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257880008934 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890373493544 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572557234964 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175028153599 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036771145784 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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