People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
College or university is the next level of education after high school. Which is not compulsory to attend but people do because of various reasons. There are three main reasons that come first in my mind which support the answer to the question: Why do you think people attend college or university?
First, for various career options an individual has to acquire a specific degree from college or university to work in that field. For example, after completing high school people could not get a job as software engineer in any IT company. To become a software engineer it is mandatory that he or she should have a professional degree from college or university. Similarly, for a doctor, nurse, psychologist, accountant and many more career options a specific degree or certificate is compulsory.
Second, some of the colleges or universities provide small skill based training or vocational courses which help people to improve their way of working, so they attend colleges or universities. For example, personality development, communication skills, self care, resilience building training, learning English, German, Latin or other foreign languages, courses are available in some universities and people pursue their preferred course or training. Because these courses help to work more efficiently.
Third, some students join college or university just after completing their schooling to gain new life experiences such as freedom from daily school routine, live independently, explore new places with friends, and explore self. For example, one of my friends went to another country to attend college because he wanted to experience his own life without family and he explored different new places and cultures during his graduation.
Conclusively, these are a few reasons for why people attend college or university. There are many different reasons such as to achieve the highest degree such as doctorate or to accomplish a research work, to collect resources for self improvement and many more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, similarly, so, third, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3746031746 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90461444677 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8874840528 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421240249134 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14850536355 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103014092004 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236359543055 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883238694069 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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