Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In today's world, students are bombarded with humungous amount of information than ever before. While some of the information is processed with ideas, trends and concepts behind these facts, the other information is consumed directly without paying attention to the concepts behind those facts. The prompt recommends that educators should make the students understand the ideas, trends, and concepts that are part of the facts rather than teaching only the facts. I agree with the prompt for the following reasons.
To begin with, the minds of the students, especially adolescents, do not focus on one thing even for a short period of time. The world inside their minds is so tumultuous that it would astound their parents to see such disorderliness if they have the means to measure it. Thus, to grab the attention of the students in the classrooms, it is important that teachers deliver facts in the most engaging manner. If the teacher only teach facts, the students quickly lose interest in such edification. They become so disinclined to learning that they begin to ponder upon why are they learning anything in the first place. This feeling of apathy will only intensify and lead to giving up education altogether. In contrast, if the teacher first states the ideas, trends and concepts behind the facts, it first arouses the curiosity in the minds of the students and makes it interesting for the students to study the facts eventually. Such instruction will capture the vagarant minds of the students and keep them focused on the facts being taught that will help them excel in life.
Moreover, such kind of edification, that involves analyzing the facts in different ways, can espouse the development of critical thinking in the students. It is very important that the teachers instigate critical thinking in the students as ratiocination is very important to solve real-world problems. Stating the ideas, trends and concepts related to facts will coerce the students to use their minds to analyze the facts and arrive at conclusions. The way the facts follow from ideas, trends and concepts will also aid the students in their professional careers when they use similar way of arriving at conclusions when solving real-world problems. Therefore, it is imperative for the educators to teach facts only after making the students advertent about the ideas, trends, and concepts behind those facts as such teaching will foster ciritical thinking.
However, in the realms of our discussion, we cannot ignore a few exceptions. When the students are dealing with a particular field of study and at some point, it is required for them to know fact from a different field of study, it may seem futile to completely understand that subject. In such scenarios, it would be more wise to only know the fact and cosider it as tenet so as make a considerable progress in the field of study of actual interest.
To recapitulate, it is important for the educators to first teach the ideas, concepts and trends behind the facts as such style of instruction will keep the students engaged in what they are learning and also helps to develop critical thinking in the students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... of information than ever before. While some of the information is processed with ideas, tr...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...not focus on one thing even for a short period of time. The world inside their minds is so tum...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is important that teachers deliver facts in the most engaging manner. If the teac...
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Line 8, column 386, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
...fact and cosider it as tenet so as make a considerable progress in the field of study of actual interes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in contrast, kind of, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04562737643 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6842490715 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433460076046 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4136261731 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.380952381 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0476190476 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254973727691 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842387757782 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607343023456 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155138364118 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365762927914 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.