What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
A decent house is a top priority for peoples’ lives because it is the place where they grow as a family. Some people think that the living room is more important than other parts of a house, this may differ based on lifestyles, personalities, and beliefs. Personally, I believe that the most important/most vital room in a house is the bedroom.
To begin with, the bedroom is the most important part of a house as it might positively affect peoples’ abilities to be healthy, active and focused. This is considered the most precious part of a house because it is the place where a person feels connected with their thoughts and ideals. Moreover, having a bedroom with beneficial conditions such as cool temperatures will increase the chances of people being well-rested which is a key for a successful day. Furthermore, If a bedroom limits light and noise from its surroundings, it will permit a person to enjoy their sleeping time. Consequently, people's immune systems will become healthier.
In addition, I consider the bedroom the most important part of a house because of privacy. Having privacy allows me to concentrate on how to improve my reading and writing skills. For instance, when I lived with my parents we all shared a common bedroom so privacy was limited; thus, I frequently lost concentration on my tasks. Additionally, when my parents and I moved to a different house and I had my own bedroom, my life changed. As a result, I was able to remain focused with fewer distractions. Since then, I became better at reading and writing, and I also woke up happier.
On the other hand, some people consider the living room important because they think that is the main room to welcome visitors. In reality, reunions with family and friends are done held only a few days a year. Also, most people work all days of the week, and during the weekend they like to visit the park with their kids and some other distractions. Therefore, the time spent in their living room is short, that is why I hold that the bedroom is more important than other parts of a house.
Overall, the living room may be the main room of a house. Yet, the benefits of a comfortable bedroom outweighs those in the living room.
A decent house is a top priority for peoples’ lives because it is the place where they grow as a family. Some people think that the living room is more important than other parts of a house, this may differ based on lifestyles, personalities, and beliefs. Personally, I believe that the most important/most vital room in a house is the bedroom.
To begin with, the bedroom is the most important part of a house as it might positively affect peoples’ abilities to be healthy, active and focused. This is considered the most precious part of a house because it is the place where a person feels connected with their thoughts and ideals. Moreover, having a bedroom with beneficial conditions such as cool temperatures will increase the chances of people being well-rested which is a key for a successful day. Furthermore, If a bedroom limits light and noise from its surroundings, it will permit a person to enjoy their sleeping time. Consequently, people's immune systems will become healthier.
In addition, I consider the bedroom the most important part of a house because of privacy. Having privacy allows me to concentrate on how to improve my reading and writing skills. For instance, when I lived with my parents we all shared a common bedroom so privacy was limited; thus, I frequently lost concentration on my tasks. Additionally, when my parents and I moved to a different house and I had my own bedroom, my life changed. As a result, I was able to remain focused with fewer distractions. Since then, I became better at reading and writing, and I also woke up happier.
On the other hand, some people consider the living room important because they think that is the main room to welcome visitors. In reality, reunions with family and friends are done held only a few days a year. Also, most people work all days of the week, and during the weekend they like to visit the park with their kids and some other distractions. Therefore, the time spent in their living room is short, that is why I hold that the bedroom is more important than other parts of a house.
Overall, the living room may be the main room of a house. Yet, the benefits of a comfortable bedroom outweighs those in the living room.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3678.0 1977.66487455 186% => OK
No of words: 774.0 407.700716846 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7519379845 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.27454789404 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75776094165 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.251937984496 0.524837075471 48% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1130.4 618.680645161 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8039938469 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.95 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 34.0 11.8709677419 286% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251895748641 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904040316922 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100856935263 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170698960427 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870521622668 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3678.0 1977.66487455 186% => OK
No of words: 774.0 407.700716846 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7519379845 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.27454789404 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75776094165 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.251937984496 0.524837075471 48% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1130.4 618.680645161 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8039938469 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.95 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 34.0 11.8709677419 286% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251895748641 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904040316922 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100856935263 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170698960427 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870521622668 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.