Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Change is the only constant in life. Heraclitus clearly mentioned the essence of life through this quote. Some people may say that earlier people led a better life, however, I believe that living today is much hassle-free. We can perform everyday tasks from home and also make our life comfortable.
To begin with, currently technology makes our lives easy. We can do things with a click of a button. For instance, if we want to buy anything, we can just visit the websites such as Amazon or Flipkart and order it sitting at home. In addition, we can communicate with people irrespective of where they are. I will tell compelling example of my personal experience. I live in India and my uncles live in America. They regularly contact us and it seems that they are not far off. Thus, technology has reduced the distance even if we are actually far away.
Furthermore, several inventions have added comfort to our lives. Some things which were tiresome at the grandparents’ early age can now be easily achieved. Take the case of long-distance journey. Aeroplane has significantly reduced the travel time and it also provides facilities like food, magazines and even a screen to watch anything of our Additionally, metros have low cost and connect every part of the states. Another example of this is television. I provides entertainment and knowledge at the comfort of our homes.
To sum up, people have a more comfortable life in today’s time than the time of our grandparent’ childhood. We can do almost anything without much efforts and time. Future generations may enjoy a more comfortable life as the technology evolves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...nother example of this is television. I provides entertainment and knowledge at the comf...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hood. We can do almost anything without much efforts and time. Future generations ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94909090909 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89465965969 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6103658449 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8095238095 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0952380952 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120608435053 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380894036937 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035971347693 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693504791863 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459427194071 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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