It is no longer possible for society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reason and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The society is build by group of similar interest people. The people in society are expected to follow the ethics and do good for society. The heros are the people who with there selfless deeds and total devotion do commendable job for the welfare of society. The absense of the heros was never experienced in any era since the civilization begins. The need of the reformation gives birth to the rising of the heros. But, the mendacious heros do exist in the society. So, the idea of no longer existance of heros is partially disagreeable.
As discussed earlier presence of heros depends on the need of the situation. It is quite a relative concept of considering heros. The heros can be one who does good for particular organization, group or individuals, while at the same time others may renounce them as hero. The best example given for such situation is a movie 'Nayak', in which the concept of one day Chief Minister has been described magnificiently. The movie ellaborates on the idea of how the rectituous person in power can change the entire structure of administration system build on the pillars of injustice. In such case, the person becomes hero in the sight of people getting benefits from his actions and a villain for the people facing losses. Thus, the concept of hero is ever-lasting.
The heros are not build, they appear among the society with there choices, stands and decisions. The heros works for the welfare of others selflessly, irrespect of the criticizm continues to be on his stand, never give up and is ready to face any consequences, take responsibility of all the decision taken and also inspires the other fellows in the society to do good for the society. This can be depicted with the example of Mr. Arunachalam aka Padman. The person is responsible to resolve problem of womens during menstural cycles days by making extremely cheap pad-maker machine. Despite of an aggresive opposition by reactionary society the person managed to achieve his goals. Till such values exists I do not think there will be scarcity of heros in our society.
One situations can be presence of pretentious demagogue who persuade others for their self-interest. These kind of people in the society can be detrimental to the society. For the ellaboration on this we can revisit the previous example of the movie 'Nayak', in which the former Chief Minister is the reprobated and pretentious kind of person, who always equivocate for personal benfits. Now, such person by some good deeds can present himself as a hero infront of naive public, but the countless harms done can not be avoided. Thus, due to such people the question of no longer existence of heros arise in ones mind and degrades the trust of one human on another.
Finally, the discussion can be concluded with a thought that though due to some pretentious people the concept of heros is endangered, the situations in future may give rise to heros with great values and ethics and make them capable to bring change in such corrupt society.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...low the ethics and do good for society. The heros are the people who with there sel...
^^^
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...endable job for the welfare of society. The absense of the heros was never experien...
^^^
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... any era since the civilization begins. The need of the reformation gives birth to ...
^^^
Line 1, column 541, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nce of heros is partially disagreeable. As discussed earlier presence of heros dep...
^^^
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ster has been described magnificiently. The movie ellaborates on the idea of how th...
^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'work'.
Suggestion: work
...hoices, stands and decisions. The heros works for the welfare of others selflessly, i...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'One situation', 'a situation', or simply 'situations'?
Suggestion: One situation; A situation; Situations
...l be scarcity of heros in our society. One situations can be presence of pretentious demagogu...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ersuade others for their self-interest. These kind of people in the society can be detrime...
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Line 4, column 605, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...f no longer existence of heros arise in ones mind and degrades the trust of one huma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 516.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84689922481 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73518964499 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480620155039 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.99550561798 340% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.2689932052 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1923076923 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.03846153846 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177119710174 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532212978767 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286557423256 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111290756024 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016032731853 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...low the ethics and do good for society. The heros are the people who with there sel...
^^^
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...endable job for the welfare of society. The absense of the heros was never experien...
^^^
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... any era since the civilization begins. The need of the reformation gives birth to ...
^^^
Line 1, column 541, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nce of heros is partially disagreeable. As discussed earlier presence of heros dep...
^^^
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ster has been described magnificiently. The movie ellaborates on the idea of how th...
^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'work'.
Suggestion: work
...hoices, stands and decisions. The heros works for the welfare of others selflessly, i...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'One situation', 'a situation', or simply 'situations'?
Suggestion: One situation; A situation; Situations
...l be scarcity of heros in our society. One situations can be presence of pretentious demagogu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ersuade others for their self-interest. These kind of people in the society can be detrime...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 605, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...f no longer existence of heros arise in ones mind and degrades the trust of one huma...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 516.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84689922481 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73518964499 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480620155039 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.99550561798 340% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.2689932052 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1923076923 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.03846153846 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177119710174 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532212978767 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286557423256 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111290756024 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016032731853 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.