The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Our life has been accelerating ever since the industrial revolution. With every new technology that comes out, the efficiency of our life is increased in ways inconceivable to our ancestors. Despite its positive impact on many aspects of humanity, a fast-paced life creates many more new challenges.
The rapid pace of life is a result of the blooming technology development. The inventions of new automobiles, aircrafts, telecommunication and internet revolutionized how we lead our life, and enabled us to efficiently overcome a barrier to communication, distance. Not only has it allowed families and friends around the world to catch up easily, it also brings about enormous change in the economical development in remote regions. For example, local farmers can now transport their fresh goods to a wider consumer base than ever before, expanding their business has never been a dream so feasible.
The fast-paced life, unfortunately, is not without perils. As people increase the efficiency of work, team work becomes easier, and collaborators can be reached wherever they are and whenever it is. Even when people are physically at home, their time with family is worn away by the never ending messages and calls. Quality family time is unfortunately not something that could speed up, and as one spend more energy dealing with fast-paced work, he or she would conceivably have less energy left for their precious family. This would result in emotional neglect, which can have irreversible effect on children and the relationship.
Moreover, a fast-paced life can be suffocating sometimes, inducing health issues of many kinds. A larger than ever proportion of people die of neglected health risks associated with work. Mental illnesses triggered by stress prevail in urban populations, who are subject to the highest speed of life. These are all obvious problems created by the accelerated life that easily becomes too pushy.
As discussed above, although a fast-paced life is associated with high efficiency, profit and hence development, the challenges it poses for humankind are immense.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248648648649 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.140540540541 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105405405405 0.0880659088768 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0702702702703 0.0497285424764 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0486486486486 0.0444667217837 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116216216216 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0459459459459 0.0406280797675 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04924534161 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162162162162 0.030933414821 52% => OK
Particles: 0.00810810810811 0.0016655270985 487% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0675675675676 0.0997080785238 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189189189189 0.0249443105267 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216216216216 0.0148568991511 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2106.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 330.0 452.878318584 73% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38181818182 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390909090909 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306060606061 0.280924506359 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233333333333 0.200843997647 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169696969697 0.132149295362 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04924534161 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.48968727796 129% => OK
Word variations: 76.4893086066 55.4138127331 138% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4117647059 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2339832666 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.882352941 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 50.0178253119 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.58333333333 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340686098386 0.391690518653 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0862572327029 0.123202303941 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0456893248368 0.077325440228 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516505987875 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144909906306 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125590732254 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635765734901 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.208515483071 0.385218514788 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0463592366121 0.0692045440612 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200574819523 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559528109061 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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