What discovery in the past 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?
Nowadays, new technologies have penetrated every single facet of our lives. Day in day out, so that without which we cannot even imagine our lives. One of these technology without which our lives seems to be paralyze is oil industry. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether oil play a key role in the economy of country or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that not only will government benefit from oil industry but also it will provide an opportunity to be exported. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reason.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that vast majorities of technological advancement including extracting oil are beneficial to different societies, which has great impact on the economy. Scientifically speaking, one of the heavy burdens on the shoulder of government is to raise country in various ways. In order to reach this goal, not only should they identify natural sources but also should be able to manage those discoveries. In fact, oil is one of the paramount discoveries especially in my country, which hardly ever people and government can deny its influential parameters. Delving further into the issue reveals that oil industry not only can enhance the economical situation but also can provide fertile ground for a country to progress and compete with various countries in this realm. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research in our country; show that countries which benefits from oil industry and its product are wealthier society among nearby country, due to the fact that they provided with significant industry, which revolutionized their economy.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that not only oil industry and its product provided financial status for the society but also can attract crowds of investors in the country. Broadly speaking, in order to expand the oil industry and related companies, a hoard of money need to be invested. To put it in other word, foreign investors can bring many benefits to every country in order to patronize such industry. Indeed, hardly ever oil companies can progress without enough money. Not until investors allocate enough budgets in this territory can the oil industry improve. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, oil industry can brings many disadvantages such as pollution, which prevent people from healthy lifestyle. Additionally, maybe other industry does not receive enough budgets as oil receives. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there is different technological advancement or even various industries, which is beneficial for every country. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that oil industry play a pivotal role in whole country around the world because it can revolutionize the economy. In addition, it can appeal myriads of investors for improving the industry and make it useful to the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...e cannot even imagine our lives. One of these technology without which our lives seems to be par...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t oil industry not only can enhance the economical situation but also can provide fertile ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent social research'.
Suggestion: recent social research
...gly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research in our country; show that countries whi...
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Line 5, column 748, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... it has, indisputably, oil industry can brings many disadvantages such as pollution, w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240282685512 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.141342756184 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901060070671 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0777385159011 0.046263068375 168% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0406360424028 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113074204947 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0335689045936 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95736922193 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335689045936 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0017667844523 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.083038869258 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030035335689 0.0209618222197 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194346289753 0.0139019557991 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3208.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 512.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.265625 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404296875 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333984375 0.251872472559 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232421875 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15625 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95736922193 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501953125 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 59.5271897256 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3333333333 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3001353769 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 54.7317708333 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.48979591837 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229188065264 0.300154397459 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11678939813 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684949350518 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452699622707 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124783813635 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888490938205 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650072778273 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463123521501 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0342547597288 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177174429558 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345897217638 0.0618886996521 56% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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