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Life is replete with ups and downs, and there are many situations in the life of people that necessitate certain crucial decisions. With this in mind, some believe that it stands to reason that it is better for human beings to make decision with the help of others, while others hold the opposite view. I, personally, subscribe to the latter attitude based on quite a few reasons, three of the most substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The most compelling reason is that according to a research conducted in one of the most reputable universities in my country, people who had made appropriate decisions, are more successful and happier. Different people survey issues from different angles. Using different people ideas gives us an opportunity to enjoy a better understanding about things. Individuals can consider all pros and cons about issues that allow them to make better decision, and thus be happier. I clarify my point of view with a real story that happened to me. Seven years ago, when I wanted to go university, I did not know I want to continue my education in what major. Finally, I managed to opt for mathematic major, thanks to the help of my parents and my friends.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the first perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that in today's modern world, every company has to be in rush so as not to be left behind in contending for the "field of competition, and they try to improve their position in their markets to acquire more market share, which helps them to increase their profit. Hence, given the existing economic situation and today's competitive environment, companies should be more conservative regarding their decisions and strive to evaluate their environment in a wise manner before making any decision. Unless they make decision carelessly, they may lose their positions in the market. For instance, I know a company, which went bankrupt owing to the fact that the company's manager did not believe other individuals' opinions. If the manager get the help of his employees and the company’s stock holders, the company may have continued its work.
Last but not least, it is clear that the more time one lives, the more experience he or she will attain. While people do not make decision alone, they can use different people's experiences that help them to make better decisions. For Instance, when I was in university, whenever I was supposed to take an academic course, I often use different students' views who had taken the course before, which gave me a chance to choose better courses and had a better scores.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned arguments discussed above, I firmly endorse my point of view that even though making decision alone has its own privileges, the merits of utilizing different people' advice to make decision outweigh those of making decision alone on the grounds that people can make better decisions, which paves the way for being prosperous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wise manner" with adverb for "wise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd strive to evaluate their environment in a wise manner before making any decision. Unless they...
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Line 4, column 426, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...efore, which gave me a chance to choose better courses and had a better scores. In s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217699115044 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.166371681416 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0884955752212 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424778761062 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0743362831858 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115044247788 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0407079646018 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76934947328 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0407079646018 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0778761061947 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012389380531 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0283185840708 0.0139019557991 204% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3020.0 2387.08602151 127% => OK
No of words: 506.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96837944664 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365612648221 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252964426877 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195652173913 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130434782609 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76934947328 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 66.6462150078 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.6315789474 20.5533526081 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.4792863647 48.84282405 187% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.947368421 120.699889404 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6315789474 20.5533526081 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 51.9280216351 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.31875 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110628043022 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0591690434867 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522377293574 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169919550697 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31603249657 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0413024567703 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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