The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that an educational programme for all young drivers before they get the valid driver licence is the most efficient solution for solving traffic problems. From my perspective, this idea is completely reasonable due to the benefits in terms of knowledge and awareness acquisition that the course offers.
Firstly, the knowledge enhancement for people is crucial because one of the most common reasons leading to traffic accidents is the lack of understanding of traffic rules. It is necessary to incorporate the law on traffic offenses and essential driving skills into the programme training. Young drivers, therefore, could not only know how to avoid committing crimes but also restrict themselves to accidents. For instance, it is extremely dangerous if drivers misunderstand traffic signs, such as speed bumps or road bends, which are set to warn people on insecure roads. As a result, the youth can afford to become safe drivers via learning from the course.
Secondly, the programme, from my standpoint, could raise the young drivers’ awareness of traffic safety. The reality pointed out that providing the illustrations about the consequences of unlawful actions and the various types of driving penalties to people would deter them from dangerous driving behaviour as well as make a habit of safe driving for them. In particular, people witnessing the examples of the tragic deaths of dangerous drivers would make a contribution to limiting their similar actions. For this reason, it is clear that this programme could result in a sharp deterioration in the accidents of traffic.
In conclusion, with all mentioned above, I am convinced that a safe driving education course acts as the best catalyst for improving road safety.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91990430283 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4115523335 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275057981013 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914228248446 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517293129023 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172734476616 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235476925527 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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