Essay topics: "Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The space and the outer world fancy our human kind for decades. To know the unknowns human travels to the space. We create history from moon to mars exploration. But there are so many unfortunate moments, so I completely agree with the statement that unmanned spaceflights are safer than manned flight.
First of all our main goal for space exploration is to gather useful information about the space or the planet. I think machines are more capable of gathering information than humans. After all, there are always human error possibilities. Where machines can gathered photos and samples without any risk of damaging it.
The second reason is that human are always vulnerable to the virus and could be ill and that can cause risks to other fellow passengers. On the other hand machines are immune to any virus and without any external physical damage they can work properly. There are so many unmanned probes and spacecraft that prove useful while gathering information. There are so many unfortunate moments such as Kalpana Chawla, who died in a space craft accidents. If we make unmanned space crafts, then we can avoid these kind of moments. Plus we can save human lives and costs. Because of space there are some permanent deformation happened in the bodies, we can ignored these by sending machines and unmanned space crafts.
At the end, people can argue that, the main aim of the space exploration is to see the unknowns with their own eyes, so they can believed it. But after all no human lives greater than discoveries.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 261 350
No. of Characters: 1242 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.019 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.759 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.429 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.353 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.343 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...nmanned space crafts, then we can avoid these kind of moments. Plus we can save human live...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 649, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'ignore'
Suggestion: ignore
...ormation happened in the bodies, we can ignored these by sending machines and unmanned ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...knowns with their own eyes, so they can believed it. But after all no human lives greate...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o human lives greater than discoveries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, after all, i think, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 261.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90038314176 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51620604215 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6154004246 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2352941176 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.70786347227 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235457163346 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749078699058 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509058429104 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140907499465 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542162699186 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.3799401198 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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