The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The recommendation in the letter to Balmer Island Gazette provided the idea to put limits on the number of rented mopeds which will prevent during summer seasons to abridge the number of road accidents. Though it contains some arguments which may look rational on the first glance, this letter is full of logical flaws.
The major reason to apply these measures is the increasing population during summer time to 100,000 people, but this fact should be investigate in detail. Thus, the total area of the inland as well as the density of population should have been mentioned to make this argument to sound more relevant. For example, if the square of the Balmer Island is tremendous, then a person per square is low. This way the increasing population will not affect much. Moreover, it is unstated that perhaps even more people come to the inland during other seasons.
The idea to restrict only rented mopeds is questionable, because there is no information that they are the main source of accidents on roads. Perhaps, these situation happened, because pedestrians are careless when they are crossing roads. That’s is why it would be more reasonable to take measures towards pedestrians and not to limit the number of mopeds. In addition to this, there might occur that locals have their own vehicles, and there is no need to rent them. Hence, the idea of restricting rented mopeds will not change the situation with the number of road accidents.
The comparison between Balmer Island and the island of Seaville is not applicable because of some reasons. The first of them is that the situation on that island might have been completely different. For example, the curtail of road accidents indeed were people who had rent mopeds, and it was proven, moreover, the population is more packed, that is why the restriction to rent 25 mopeds per day played off. There is no reason to rely on the experience of that island, because it has its own experience which can differs a lot.
To sum up, based on the arguments I provided in this essay, the recommendation to restrict rented moped may not work well as it is supposed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: ON_FIRST_GLANCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at'?
Suggestion: at
... some arguments which may look rational on the first glance, this letter is full o...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...res is the increasing population during summer time to 100,000 people, but this fact should...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'investigated'?
Suggestion: investigated
...100,000 people, but this fact should be investigate in detail. Thus, the total area of the ...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
... source of accidents on roads. Perhaps, these situation happened, because pedestrians are carel...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion with the number of road accidents. The comparison between Balmer Island and...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...been completely different. For example, the curtail of road accidents indeed were people wh...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...e, the curtail of road accidents indeed were people who had rent mopeds, and it was ...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'differ'
Suggestion: differ
...use it has its own experience which can differs a lot. To sum up, based on the argum...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed may not work well as it is supposed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 364.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88186813187 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59266583526 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4807909279 57.8364921388 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.529411765 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.70786347227 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216654828978 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682083659418 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619537449048 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116419106372 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624465361616 0.0628817314937 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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