The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"Jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Also, a number of well-known jazz musicians own homes in Monroe. Nevertheless, the nearest jazz club is over an hour away. Given the popularity of jazz in Monroe and a recent nationwide study indicating that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment, a jazz music club in Monroe would be tremendously profitable."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author suggests that a jazz club would make a lot of money in Monroe. However, there are several assumptions that need supports in order to substantiate his claim.
First, the author mentions that there is an annual jazz festival in Monroe that attracts over 100,000 people. The assumptions is that most of the people that attend the festival are from Monroe or its neighborhoods. Therefore, it means that there are quite a few possible consumers that are going to have fun at the jazz music club. However, it is possible that many of the people are from the other cities and they are not likely to stay in Monroe for a long time after the festival. The reason why the festival is held at Monroe is only because of the cheap rent instead of their great population for enjoying jazz music.
The highest-rated radio program in Monroe is the weeknight program 'Jazz Nightly.' The author assumes that the rating is worth trusted. Yet, there is a possibility that the rating is biased. For example, people are more likely to use Internet as an interface to listen to music. As a result, there is few people that actually participated in the rating process of radio programs. Even if the result comes from a survey involving many people, it is still likely that those who listen to radio are not going to spend their money at a jazz music club. For example, most of those who listen to radio prefer to enjoy the music at night rather than go to the club.
The author states that typical jazz fan spends approximately $1,000 every year on jazz entertainment. The assumption here is that people do spend money at jazz music clubs. Nevertheless, it is still possible that people spend most of their money on other merchandise related to jazz music, for example, on buying CD or tickets for the jazz festivals.
The author's claim relies on several assumptions that need to be addressed.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 331 350
No. of Characters: 1514 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.265 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.574 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.41 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.471 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.554 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ts over 100,000 people. The assumptions is that most of the people that attend the...
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Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat population for enjoying jazz music. The highest-rated radio program in Monro...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is the weeknight program Jazz Nightly. The author assumes that the rating is worth...
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Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ic at night rather than go to the club. The author states that typical jazz fan ...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at typical jazz fan spends approximately ,000 every year on jazz entertainment. Th...
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Line 7, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g CD or tickets for the jazz festivals. The authors claim relies on several assu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 331.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70694864048 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50704322706 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456193353474 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1322457489 57.8364921388 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294836401278 0.218282227539 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964879255383 0.0743258471296 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847103207251 0.0701772020484 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144503159592 0.128457276422 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13382559721 0.0628817314937 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.3799401198 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.3550499002 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.197005988 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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