Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Some people suggest that the society should try to protect endangered animals only if human activities cause potential extinction. Although the above statement seems to be logical at first glance, I believe that the government and associated organizations should spare no effort to save all sepcies in their countries rather than selecting only some of those animals hurted by human related tasks.
Firstly, it is quite difficult and tough for biologists and other researchers to identify the primary cause of the damage for some kinds of species, since the human activities do make onmipresent influence on our environment. If we cannot ensure whether the negative factors are from unhuman change or human activities, it is unreliable to decide which animals deserve our assistance and perseverence. An appropriate example cannot be far away: A great number of fishes disappear in the south ocean of China. Some scientist argue that the oversell of fish leads to the condition of underwater animals, but others believe that the regular climate change should be blamed.
Furthermore, each animal is the unique part of the life chain, therefore, it is significant to give our helping hand to save all the endangered species. Otherwise, the extinction of any animal would cause the irrepirable results for unknown potential value, since many species have mysterious effects on our environment, but our scientists did not belie all the information and knowledge in terms of those species.
Additionally, before making any decision to protect endangered animals, we should entirely investigate the financial cost and the value of each specie in terms of environment. By doing so, we can efficiently make a tradeoff between the variety of specie and financial consumption.
Overall, I suppose that we should protect all the species fallen into the danger of extinction whether the negative effects from human activities or not, becasue all species are the distinctive part of our nature.
Comments
e-rater score report
Wrong topics
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 314 350
No. of Characters: 1637 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.213 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.78 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.392 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.388 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...he south ocean of China. Some scientist argue that the oversell of fish leads to the ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 535, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ean of China. Some scientist argue that the oversell of fish leads to the condition of under...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 314.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34076433121 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86992862701 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9401259739 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.454545455 119.503703932 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.70786347227 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0552456403763 0.218282227539 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238279422861 0.0743258471296 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240742527851 0.0701772020484 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294133457314 0.128457276422 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212925064159 0.0628817314937 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.3799401198 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.3550499002 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.5979740519 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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