Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with out stations's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
The decision for the television station to recover the weather and local news coverage on late-night news programs casts doubts and needs to be further investigated. Before drawing to that conclusion, much more evidence needs to be presented regarding many aspects that are mentioned in the statement.
First, one must find out that weather viewers who filed complaints concerning the channel's reporting on weather and local news are representative of the popularity that the late-night program targeted. For instance, if the program is aiming for the views of housewives who provide the most profit for the program and often stay up late enough to see the show, and if the complaints received are mostly from men, then the solution would be unwise from economic perspective. In addition, the claim did not clarify the content of those complaints, so that there could be some misunderstanding as to the viewers are not satisfied by whether the fact that weather and local news are not covered in the late-night program only, or the fact that the channel does no reporting on such topics at all. if the viewers are merely unhappy that the channel does no reports on weather and local news, then the solution could otherwise be adding another program during day time to cover such content.
Moreover, it is hardly logical to speculate that the reason of the decresed advertisement contracts from local businesses is the erase of the time for weather and local news. In fact, there are numerous other conditions that could lead to the seemingly alike result. For example, maybe this statement is from 2008 when the whole country was suffering from economic shrinks, where advertisement contracts for almost all the programs and all television channgels shrunk. Or, maybe the local business stopped working with the channel because most of them tout their products online these days. However, in stead of providing supportive evidence to rule out such possibilities, the statement does not give any backing information.
To conclude, the statement is bised in the process of drawing a resolution. In order to be logically cogent and sound, more supportive materials should be presented and the detailed situation should be explicated.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
One more argument wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1835 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.055 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.684 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.208 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.057 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 793, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...oes no reporting on such topics at all. if the viewers are merely unhappy that the...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ment contracts from local businesses is the erase of the time for weather and local news....
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Line 9, column 601, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...ir products online these days. However, in stead of providing supportive evidence to rule o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21212121212 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75696610693 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3717634428 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.538461538 119.503703932 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 23.324526521 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 5.70786347227 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301226048952 0.218282227539 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102528814327 0.0743258471296 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100339952469 0.0701772020484 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15857803129 0.128457276422 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104708154957 0.0628817314937 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.3799401198 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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