A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled foo

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A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food and determined that all chemicals found in the food were chemicals that are approved for use in pet food. Thus, the recalled food was not responsible for these symptoms, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.

After getting complaints about vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness, the food company has made decision to recall four million pounds of pet food. After some investigation it turns out that the food samples that were tested, are only chemicals that were approved for use in pet food. Thus, they came to conclusion that recalled food is not responsible and they should stop devoting further resources to investigation. In my opinion, there are some ananswered questions which need top be solved before making choice to stop invetigation.

The firts question is regarding complaints. It has been given that many complaints have came from different pet owners, but it is not clear that how many complaints have came. Is there enough number of complaints that lead the company to make decision of recalling the four million pound of pet food, and if, there are huge number of complainst then company should investigate the probem comprehensively regardless of it has having to do with food or not. Because, the problem might not be caused by the food recalled, but solving the issue will definitely help company in maintaining trust for their customers.

Another question is for the samples which are tested. It is impossible to test entire 4 million pound pet food for quality and unwanted chemicals. But it is not certain from the argument that how they selected sample for testing. The ideal sampling should come from food packets that were ditributed among geographically different areas, and to different kind of selling spaces. For instance local store in New York, Walmart in Los Angles, Amazon store house in New jersey. The samples coming from distinct places and situations, so that, they were affected differently by environmetn might give different results. One of the situation might causing food to produce cerain chemical, which will later harm the health of consumer. More ideally, the samples should come from the areas from where most complains were came.

Moreover, it is also necessary to to check the influence of the chemicals which are approved to use pet food. It may be the issue that initially some chemicals found innocuous to pets, but they are insidious. One reason might be that, the food is affecting specific species of pets, then it must be answerd accordingly. Timely testing for all approved chemicals on different species of pets is vital to ensure their safety.

In summary, the recalled food may or may not be resoponsibel for te problem caused. But, testing further will help to create trustv among the people, as well as provide surity in actions determined.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: come
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in summary, kind of, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07192575406 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.642890019 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 204.123752495 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512761020882 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.67365269461 418% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7750744185 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.70786347227 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433032076762 0.218282227539 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1229153627 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140140986234 0.0701772020484 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246059808544 0.128457276422 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13143757281 0.0628817314937 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 98.500998004 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Sentence: In my opinion, there are some ananswered questions which need top be solved before making choice to stop invetigation.
Error: ananswered Suggestion: answered
Error: invetigation Suggestion: investigation

Sentence: The firts question is regarding complaints.
Error: firts Suggestion: first

Sentence: Is there enough number of complaints that lead the company to make decision of recalling the four million pound of pet food, and if, there are huge number of complainst then company should investigate the probem comprehensively regardless of it has having to do with food or not.
Error: probem Suggestion: problem
Error: complainst Suggestion: complains

Sentence: The ideal sampling should come from food packets that were ditributed among geographically different areas, and to different kind of selling spaces.
Error: ditributed Suggestion: distributed

Sentence: The samples coming from distinct places and situations, so that, they were affected differently by environmetn might give different results.
Error: environmetn Suggestion: environment

Sentence: One of the situation might causing food to produce cerain chemical, which will later harm the health of consumer.
Error: cerain Suggestion: certain

Sentence: One reason might be that, the food is affecting specific species of pets, then it must be answerd accordingly.
Error: answerd Suggestion: answer

Sentence: In summary, the recalled food may or may not be resoponsibel for te problem caused.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: resoponsibel Suggestion: responsible
Error: te Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: But, testing further will help to create trustv among the people, as well as provide surity in actions determined.
Error: trustv Suggestion: trust
Error: surity Suggestion: No alternate word

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 431 350
No. of Characters: 2123 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.556 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.926 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.559 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.682 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5