A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its profes

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A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its professors for the purpose of enhancing morale among the faculty and luring new professors.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

The faculty committee head produced a survey that seems to attribute positive results in a new program that facilitates covered tuition for faculty children. The study professed that faculty retention rates increased when this program was offered, and the committee stipulates that this phenomenon will improve professor morale and attract future employees. However, the study fails to mention the data set and cannot establish the statistical significance on the reviewed data. Furthermore, the faculty cannot draw lofty conclusions regarding other variables without due considerations. The faculty committee should strengthen its causal analysis between faculty retention, analyze cost-benefits of this program, include appropriate considerations on the other effected variables proposed.

The faculty’s study needs to assess its data set and causality between faculty retention and the new dependent education benefit before professing the established causality. How big was the sample size for the study? If the study only looked at a body of twenty faculty members, it is insurmountably hard to establish statistical significance to this correlation. The law of large numbers demands sample size (n) be larger than 1,000 data points to even consider significant causal relationships. Otherwise, the new program may be positively correlated with the faculty retention rate by chance. This direct correlation may have a significant R-squared value but not establish that the independent variable leads to the dependent variably changing.

There may be omitted variable bias in the study. It is important that the study researchers consider other unobserved variables to prevent these biases. If the study members do not consider other latent variables such as faculty employment positions and career considerations, the study may not accurately represent a causal relationship. For example, the spike in the faculty retention may have verisimilitude to the program effects whereas it results from a previous loss in faculty members prior to the study.

Furthermore, the faculty head does not cite how much the faculty retention increased compared to the non-program environment and does not consider its resultant costs. The study may establish a low impact increase in faculty retention such as 1% that does not warrant expounded employee benefits. The education benefit conferred on faculty children may far outweigh the value of faculty retention. If the value of faculty retention equates to $50,000 over the life of a professor tenure, but the free education of his child costs $100,000 due to private college costs, this will result in a net profit loss for the college. This problem compounds in the event of multiple children per faculty member. The college should analyze the intrinsic value of faculty retention against the backdrop of the extended benefit costs.

The faculty member board also recommends that the program will increase employee morale. This is a farcical presupposition. The study research needs to further analyze the enigmatic variable of employee morale. The study must consider career satisfaction, quotidian conditions, employee psyche, peripheral life events, and a host of other effects that may contribute to “employee morale”. In other words, the researchers must define the variable morale and tease out any detractors that may influence causal inferences. It is not enough to state that faculty retention equates to employee morale through a transitive property deduction.

The faculty member committee also argues that this program will lure more professors into its ranks. Although the study has somewhat unreliably established a correlation between faculty retention and the new benefit program, this also does not establish that the program will increase recruitment rates. The data researchers must buttress this claim with due consideration. What factors influence talent acquisition at the college? New professors may be more interested in academic research, tenure, or pay scales as opposed to benefits for their children. This will be especially true if the new college professor does not have any dependents.

In conclusion, the academic research presented by the faculty board does not establish a robust causal relationship between faculty retention and the new free education for faculty dependents. The faculty must consider omitted variable bias and statistical significance to improve its conclusions. Moreover, the faculty must properly evaluate costs and benefits in its new program before professing its virtues. The faculty member board presages that the new program will also increase employee morale and recruit new professors. Once again, the researchers need to consider a myriad of unobservable variables in these relationships prior to jumping to these conclusions. If the data scientists fortify their study accordingly, the college may have a veritably fruitful benefit program for its faculty members.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.9520958084 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 28.8173652695 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 16.3942115768 213% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4244.0 2260.96107784 188% => OK
No of words: 747.0 441.139720559 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68139223561 5.12650576532 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.22793465313 4.56307096286 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00006959186 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 204.123752495 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416331994645 0.468620217663 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1328.4 705.55239521 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 26.0 8.76447105788 297% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 19.7664670659 197% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2520345234 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.820512821 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89743589744 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 8.20758483034 305% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193135785782 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057651374121 0.0743258471296 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436552379063 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114867551349 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406765814704 0.0628817314937 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.3550499002 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.5979740519 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 189.0 98.500998004 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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flaws:
No. of Words: 747 350

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 39 15
No. of Words: 747 350
No. of Characters: 4150 1500
No. of Different Words: 291 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.228 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.556 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.875 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 346 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 294 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 193 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 134 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.127 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.59 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.5 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5