The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wildlife sanctuary in 2004, development along the coastal wetlands has been prohibited. Now local development interests are lobbying for the West Lansburg council to allow an access road to be built along the edge of wetlands. Neighboring Eastern Carpenteria, which had a similar sanctuary, has seen its sea otter population decline since the repeal of its sanctuary status in 1978. In order to preserve the region's biodiversity and ensure a healthy environment, the West Lansburg council should not allow the road to be built."
The author here claims that the population of tufted grounghog population would decline if there would be the construction of road along the edge of wet land, this statement doesn't stand on strong ground. Well, there may be some other reasons for the diminshing population of tufted groundhog. Population of tufted grounghog is eventually decreasing eventhough there isn't any roadways to disturb the sanctuary. Rather than cancelling the tender appeal for road construction we should look out for factors that are responsible for lower count of tufted groundhog.
One of the possiblity is that the tufted groundhog are being stalked by the local tribes living near by, may be for any reason for their flesh that may be used to make clothes, or for eating purpose. Local tribes may be in penury and may not have enough to get themselves food, so there's a possibility that they are hunting them to feed their stomach.
Also, the worls have developed is the these thirty decades it would be wrong to compare the things that have been expierenced so lately, author didn't provide any evidence to compare.
Population of sea otter and tufted groundhog which are a way different from each other, author is comapring them apple to apple, which again doesn't stand on strong ground.
There's a possibility that tufted grounded population has decreased due to the chemical wastes the industries are letting directly into the water causing water population and hence which may not be at par which tufted groundhog could tolerate and are eventually dying because of the same reason. It would be better to check the decompositon and other chemical wastes are being exposed in water rather then prohibiting road construction nearby.
Region's biodiversity and healthy environment can be maintained along with the road construction on the edges as it is only on the periphery, gaurds could be employed so that no pedestrain or wanderer should enter the sanctuary without permit. Other manhood could be employed to regularly feeding the flora and fauna and noticing/researching the reason for decling population of some. The author has cogented the reason for not allowing the construction of road.
Biodiversity and healthy environment was not being maintained since long, rather the author should focus on the other imperative things that are to do be implemented for better and secure enviornment for century.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Well, there may be some other reasons for the diminshing population of tufted groundhog.
Error: diminshing Suggestion: diminishing
Sentence: Population of tufted grounghog is eventually decreasing eventhough there isn't any roadways to disturb the sanctuary.
Error: eventhough Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: One of the possiblity is that the tufted groundhog are being stalked by the local tribes living near by, may be for any reason for their flesh that may be used to make clothes, or for eating purpose.
Error: possiblity Suggestion: possibility
Sentence: Also, the worls have developed is the these thirty decades it would be wrong to compare the things that have been expierenced so lately, author didn't provide any evidence to compare.
Error: expierenced Suggestion: experienced
Error: worls Suggestion: works
Sentence: Population of sea otter and tufted groundhog which are a way different from each other, author is comapring them apple to apple, which again doesn't stand on strong ground.
Error: comapring Suggestion: comparing
Sentence: It would be better to check the decompositon and other chemical wastes are being exposed in water rather then prohibiting road construction nearby.
Error: decompositon Suggestion: decomposition
Sentence: Region's biodiversity and healthy environment can be maintained along with the road construction on the edges as it is only on the periphery, gaurds could be employed so that no pedestrain or wanderer should enter the sanctuary without permit.
Error: pedestrain Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: gaurds Suggestion: guards
Sentence: Other manhood could be employed to regularly feeding the flora and fauna and noticing/researching the reason for decling population of some.
Error: decling Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The author has cogented the reason for not allowing the construction of road.
Error: cogented Suggestion: counted
Sentence: Biodiversity and healthy environment was not being maintained since long, rather the author should focus on the other imperative things that are to do be implemented for better and secure enviornment for century.
Error: enviornment Suggestion: environment
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1975 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.692 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.615 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.689 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ng the edge of wet land, this statement doesnt stand on strong ground. Well, there may...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... eventually decreasing eventhough there isnt any roadways to disturb the sanctuary. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...eing stalked by the local tribes living near by, may be for any reason for their flesh ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... have enough to get themselves food, so theres a possibility that they are hunting the...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...have been expierenced so lately, author didnt provide any evidence to compare. Popu...
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Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...apring them apple to apple, which again doesnt stand on strong ground. Theres a pos...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...again doesnt stand on strong ground. Theres a possibility that tufted grounded popu...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 401, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...astes are being exposed in water rather then prohibiting road construction nearby. ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he edges as it is only on the periphery, gaurds could be employed so that no pede...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17948717949 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78645639666 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7256645656 57.8364921388 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.285714286 119.503703932 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 23.324526521 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104981479757 0.218282227539 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445699955651 0.0743258471296 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344608640967 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055197613464 0.128457276422 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321646204163 0.0628817314937 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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