Two years ago, radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call-in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's recent success with call-in advice programming, and citing a nationwide survey indicating that many radio listeners are quite interested in such programs, the station manager of KICK in Medway recommends that KICK include more call-in advice programs in an attempt to gain a larger audience share in its listening area.
The argument states that the audience for the radio station WCQP in Rockville is increased because of call-in advice programming. Hence, the manager of radio station KICK in Medway recommendes the same program to increase the audience. However, there are many questions need to be answered before implementing the recommendations. The manager of KICK should think about the people interest in Medway, what if their interest is different from Rockville? Further, it is also stated in the argument that the survey from throught the nation indicate the people are interested all-in advice such programs. Before considering the survey details, the manager should evaluate the autheticity of the survey data such as the experience of the surveyer, the number of the people surveyed, the selection of people for carrying out the survey. Therefore, these questions should be answered before implementing the call-in advice programs in the radio station of KICK in Medway.
The first and foremost issue with the argument is that assuming the call-in advice programming would fetch the more number of audience in the radio station of KICK in Medway since the program successed in Rockville. However, the manager should concentrate the interest of the people in Medway. What if the people in Medway does not like the program? In that case the program woud face the catestoropic failure. Therefore, it is required to survey the localites for their interest. Selecting the program based on their interest would fetch the increase in the audience for the radio station of KICK in Medway.
The second problem in the argumnet is that the manager beliving the survey conducted through the nation on the call-in advice programs. Before considering the survey, the manager should think of the authenticity of the survey. What if the survey had taken by the unexperienced surveyer? What if the survey represents the small amount of the people? What if the survey represents only households? Therefore, the manager should consider the errors in the survey before relying on that. It is also advisable to conduct one more survey in Medway to subtantiate the existing one.
Therefore, the manager of the radio station KICK should consider the afore mentioned flaws of the arguments such as the interest of the people in Medway and authenticity of the survey. Further, before impleemnting the call-in advice programs, it is required to take a survey in Medway to foresee the possible success of the program.
Therefore, the manager of the radio station KICK should consider the afore mentioned flaws of the arguments such as the interest of the people in Medway and authenticity of the survey. Further, before impleemnting the call-in advice programs, it is required to take a survey in Medway to foresee the possible success of the program.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Hence, the manager of radio station KICK in Medway recommendes the same program to increase the audience.
Error: recommendes Suggestion: recommended
Sentence: Further, it is also stated in the argument that the survey from throught the nation indicate the people are interested all-in advice such programs.
Error: throught Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Before considering the survey details, the manager should evaluate the autheticity of the survey data such as the experience of the surveyer, the number of the people surveyed, the selection of people for carrying out the survey.
Error: autheticity Suggestion: authenticity
Error: surveyer Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The first and foremost issue with the argument is that assuming the call-in advice programming would fetch the more number of audience in the radio station of KICK in Medway since the program successed in Rockville.
Error: successed Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In that case the program woud face the catestoropic failure.
Error: catestoropic Suggestion: catastrophic
Sentence: Therefore, it is required to survey the localites for their interest.
Error: localites Suggestion: localizes
Sentence: The second problem in the argumnet is that the manager beliving the survey conducted through the nation on the call-in advice programs.
Error: beliving Suggestion: believing
Error: argumnet Suggestion: argument
Sentence: What if the survey had taken by the unexperienced surveyer?
Error: surveyer Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: unexperienced Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It is also advisable to conduct one more survey in Medway to subtantiate the existing one.
Error: subtantiate Suggestion: substantiate
Sentence: Further, before impleemnting the call-in advice programs, it is required to take a survey in Medway to foresee the possible success of the program.
Error: impleemnting Suggestion: implementing
Sentence: Further, before impleemnting the call-in advice programs, it is required to take a survey in Medway to foresee the possible success of the program.
Error: impleemnting Suggestion: implementing
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 2316 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.068 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.632 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 203 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.042 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.274 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or the radio station of KICK in Medway. The second problem in the argumnet is th...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...resents the small amount of the people? What if the survey represents only household...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 55.5748502994 149% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 2260.96107784 105% => OK
No of words: 457.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19474835886 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72894332292 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.330415754923 0.468620217663 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 705.55239521 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0928131627 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0416666667 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.70786347227 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165920804115 0.218282227539 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661135172278 0.0743258471296 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922574999976 0.0701772020484 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116955306733 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689061906793 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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