An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Doctors play an important role in the current version of society and I believe this will continued as long as human specie exists. Doctors are the sole entity on whom human must trust the most among the roles of the society. Doctors play a role of water in arid desert. Without doctor, society will be an inhospitable place. Therefore, it is a responsibility of doctor to adhere to ethics. It is a responsibility of doctor to make themselves deserve this trust of people.
I believe doctors are well educated and enough trained to fulfill all the needs of the patient. An ailing patient should have easy access to doctor's record because if there is a critical surgery to be done and the doctor is callow and inexperienced, patient cannot handover his/her life in doctor's hand. But let's say, doctor treating the patient is expertise in his/her work, access to his/her history of surgeries should not matter.
But just by accessing the the history of the doctor's work may not provide sufficient evidence to prove that the doctor can treat the ailment. It may happen that the record of treating similar patients are fake and made by a dishonest doctor himself/herself.
There should be videos or photos created by the patients to prove that doctor is actually competant to treat the treatment.
It is not only responsibility of doctor to maintain records, but also hospital should maintain the records of doctors successful operations. If the hospital seems to be a decent place for the treatment, there are high chances doctors working there are also genuinely competant at what they do.
Question comes to the confidentiality. A doctor may think his/her history should be kept private, in that case patient might not be able to view his/her records. Therefore, it is always wise to have one doctor among the family members. Patients are paying heavy costs to have a successful treatment, not for a naiive doctor to play an experiment.
But if all the patients start selecting the doctors to get treated on the basis of their history, the inexperienced doctors will hardly get any chance to kick start their career. New doctors can work under the guidance of any reputed and well known senior doctor as an assistance.
I believe, if the surgery or say treatment is not critical enough then access to doctor's history is not that important but if the treatment is critical patients ought to have access to doctor's records.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...sion of society and I believe this will continued as long as human specie exists. Doctors...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he most among the roles of the society. Doctors play a role of water in arid desert. Wi...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...dover his/her life in doctors hand. But lets say, doctor treating the patient is exp...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...uld not matter. But just by accessing the the history of the doctors work may not pro...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...uld not matter. But just by accessing the the history of the doctors work may not pro...
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Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'doctor'.
Suggestion: doctor
...t is not critical enough then access to doctors history is not that important but if th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88834951456 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70887705388 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45145631068 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9412520449 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9047619048 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61904761905 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46422814949 0.243740707755 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152525761551 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109083513784 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247485582318 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117013304734 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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