Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Men and women should have equal rights for each and every task of the society. To take a position for the issue, we first need to mention facts and evidences. Since antiquity, men are considered predominantly to work for the financial needs of the house whereas women are considered more of housewife. Women, in ancient times, were not allowed to study as much as they want. They were not allowed build a solid career even if they want. They were told building a decent career is of no use, as they were bound to marry after a certain age and then they were put to household work. This orthodox thinking was evolved now.
Now, women work hard to build a dignified career for themselves; they want to stand up on their own feet, rather than depending on someone else. Modern times women work hard to fulfill their dreams and not depend on someone else to work hard to fulfill their dreams. People often believe women are meant for household work because they are more responsible for the child than her husband is. That should not be the case, I feel. Both mother and father are equally responsible for the child's upbringing. They should treat every problem in marital life, together. Just because a woman gives birth to her child, the child is her sole responsibility? Is it not the husband's responsibility, too?
I believe God has created this world by keeping in mind certain things. He gave woman the blessing to give a birth to her child because, I feel, woman are more stronger than man, mentally they are more competant to do so. But their are few tasks that depend on the physicalities of a person. Let's say, to become a guard for the President of the nation. I agree to the fact women are equally fit for this position, but still we see men guarding the celebrities or the president. On the other hand, women are competant to be a good cook because they have a blessed hands to do this activity than men. Women can be a better teacher than men, because they know a better way to handle the students than men know.
I feel, story has changed now. Men and women are equal now. Now, men are competant to be good teachers and women are fit to be a strong guard for celebrities. We see the generation is evolving and giving equal opportunities to men and women in each and every field. In modern times, it is very obvious to see, women go and work in an office but men is unemployed working as a househusband at home, taking care for his child, cooking a delicious food for her wife. Physical differences are treated as inconsequential. Everyone is equal, be it a man or a woman. A woman has equal right to build a solid career as a man has. Everyone is working for the betterment of the society. Appearance of a person can be neglected if the person is highly competant for a task. Everyone has their own right to work and pursue a career as he/she wants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 661, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'husbands'' or 'husband's'?
Suggestion: husbands'; husband's
... her sole responsibility? Is it not the husbands responsibility, too? I believe God ha...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...to her child because, I feel, woman are more stronger than man, mentally they are more compet...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...y they are more competant to do so. But their are few tasks that depend on the physic...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...epend on the physicalities of a person. Lets say, to become a guard for the Presiden...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then, whereas, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 524.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46374045802 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49954471118 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458015267176 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2191197582 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8787878788 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.8787878788 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0303030303 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19461673644 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605195676471 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476711592208 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131928612343 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354060241407 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 14.1392134831 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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