All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain you reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In these days, some selected students take their opportunity to study abroad for more than one semester in several forms such as exchange students in many universities. But I think that all students need to take advantage of the chance to study abroad for more than one semester. Some people can argue that leaving their own university or college for more than a semester distracts the students from their academic activities. However, I believe that there are a number of values that we can learn from foreign experiences which are even more important than knowledge from textbooks.
First of all, by studying abroad, students can learn diversity which is one of the most important values in the 21st century. Diversity is the ability to comprehend the other people who are totally different from ourselves. Thus, diversity is a prerequisite in the era of globalization. Diversity can be more easily learnt while a student is studying in the university than she travelling. For instance, a student has high possibility to make local friends who can teach her local cultures in the university by joining a student club. Although some can argue that most of the students tend to hang out with the students from their home country, it is meaningful to be able to observe and experience the way of living in a foreign country.
Furthermore, a student can practice the language of the country he is visiting. Learning a foreign language can be helpful to both the student’s future career and the improvement of education quality of his home university. Speaking a foreign language fluently always becomes an advantage when a student looks for a job. In addition, it can enhance the quality of education of the university by the student delivering significant resources in foreign languages to their classmates. But what if they visit a country who speaks same language as their mother tongue? Still, they can read the books written in different perspective than their homeland, which will be meaningful.
In conclusion, I believe that an opportunity to study in a foreign country must be given to all students in college or university. Because this experience can bolster their ability to understand diversity and strengthen their foreign language skills, which are important values in globalized modern world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
...on. Diversity can be more easily learnt while a student is studying in the university...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'travels'.
Suggestion: travels
... is studying in the university than she travelling. For instance, a student has high possi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11609498681 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8596446783 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472295514512 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7361294896 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.722222222 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198885980536 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758909124881 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405309237799 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139336770442 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029633061737 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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