All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Some people say that participating in volunteering work at children’s schools has to be mandatory. However, I have a different opinion. I insist that no one cannot and should not force parents to volunteer at schools for the following reasons.
Firstly, each family has different stories, and some may not be able to volunteer time. To be specific, there might be a family that will suffer from making a living if they do not work every day. In another case, some parents live apart from their children for various reasons. Then, it is obvious that requiring parents to volunteer at schools may push some of them to encounter problems. Moreover, it will be ignoring the diverse situations of families while understanding and respecting diversity is one of the most important virtues these days. For this reason, I believe school volunteering work cannot be forcefully required of parents.
Secondly, some parents may not be willing to visit schools. Many parents want to know how their children are doing at school. Volunteering at schools can be a good opportunity for them to closely look at their children’s doing at school. However, for a certain educational reason, some parents may hesitate to intervene in their children’s school life. To be specific, they may believe that if they visit schools often, it can be an obstacle for their children to grow up independently. Although schools are where educating children, they cannot control all the ways of nurturing by parents. Thus, I believe schools cannot make parents’ volunteering activities mandatory.
It is obvious that there are benefits to inviting parents to volunteer at children’s schools. However, I believe it should not be forcefully required of parents for reasons including what I abovementioned.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 287.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20905923345 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97600141039 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484320557491 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.99588446 57.8364921388 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0555555556 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 23.324526521 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51494749865 0.218282227539 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175290185146 0.0743258471296 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690063743619 0.0701772020484 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336095479157 0.128457276422 262% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448559376248 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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