All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discu

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All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

For a company to operate efficiently it is necessary that the company is tantamount with other companies in all aspects. The above issue contends that if a company spends more time listening to the idea of their own employees there would be no need to hire outside consultants for better efficiency.
Firstly, consultant play a significant role in enhancing the business. It is mandatory to have a group of consultants in a company to burgeon the business. If a company hires consultants from outside,it will be beneficial to the company as outside consultants will have immense work experience and ability to tackle instant issues.For example, if a company hires a consultant who has worked in some another company here to fore,it will be of great advantage for the company hiring the employee as he will have good business networking and also good understanding to solve issues at hand.
Secondly,if a company spends more time listening to their employees, it will be beneficial to the company but not as advantageous as hiring outside employees would be.The employees are familiar only with the clients of the company and have good understanding to interact with the clients of the company and resolve their problems. But this will only not lead to growth in business because a company needs to add on clients to its repertoire persistently to get a good hold on the market.
If a company hires consultants from outside it will open up myriad of opportunities for a company to flourish and grow their business. The new consultants will bring new ideas and thoughts based on their work experience which will help in operating the company efficiently as well as boosting the business.
There will be some cost associated in hiring the new consultants like their salary, accomodation,travel,food,etc. but they will add on their qualities to improve the business and increase the income of the company. The new consultants can suggest new strategies to compete at global level and improve the reputation of the company at international level.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07121661721 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19181090339 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445103857567 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.7626596 60.3974514979 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446746472448 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189039989682 0.0831039109588 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118045974712 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293461749905 0.150359130593 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110975322214 0.0667264976115 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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