All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
The issue tries to convey a very common tendency of current companies in which the company hires outside consultants to suggest ways for more efficient operation of company. This issue seems true but can be refuted in many ways as it is possible that in order to achieve efficiency one's own employees can help more as compared to outside consultants.
When it comes to knowing the merits and demerits of company, it is their own employees that are aware of it well and not some outside consultant. As the company employees are familiar with the companies environment they will be able to judge more efficient ways in improving efficiency. Sometimes, the solution presented by the outside consultant might just affect the companies enthusiasm. As the outside consultants are not fully aware of the companies working methods they might give an efficient but a solution that might be disliked by the companies staff. In a company there are always loyal employees who are always ready to help the company build good reputation. This employees can always help the company develop efficient solutions. While there is a always a chance that the outside consultant might not be so loyal and often might lead to leaking the companies information elsewhere.
Whenever the companies own employee works on a solution he/she always intend to develop a solution which might be helpful to his colleges. There are many famous example in which companies own gave a solution which change the entire course of company. In late 1990's when browser in computer was not free and people in order to use it had to pay some amount, it was Bill Gates,companies own employee who gave the solution to make browser free in order to increase efficient sale of its other products like Microsoft Windows. In this scenario if a external consultant was hired he would have definitely given the solution which could have made the situation worse. Due to this solution many competitors like Netscape and others were forced to quite the competition.During the independence movement of India it was the vision and idea of Sardar Patel the countries own who helped the country get together.
By this all example we cannot conclude that always the solution given by the insider would be 100% efficient. Sometime the consultants might be right and their solution might be the one which is more efficient. It all depends upon the consultants experience and understanding of the problem. Whenever a companies own employee cannot get a efficient solution it is better to try out a external consultant. Sometimes, due to being connected with many companies the consultant can give a better proved solution.
Thus, it can be proved that though the companies are pretty much dependent on the external consultants, the company should first give chance to their internal employees and if they fails then they should consult external consultants. Thus we cannot conclude whom the company should try but they should always be proud of their staff and always consider them on higher level as compared to consultants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ciency ones own employees can help more as compared to outside consultants. W...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t well and not some outside consultant. As the company employees are familiar with...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...company employees are familiar with the companies environment they will be able to judge ...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...utside consultant might just affect the companies enthusiasm. As the outside consultants ...
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Line 4, column 673, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...help the company build good reputation. This employees can always help the company d...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the companies information elsewhere. Whenever the companies own employee works on a s...
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Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'intends'.
Suggestion: intends
...loyee works on a solution he/she always intend to develop a solution which might be he...
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Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
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Suggestion: , companies
...ad to pay some amount, it was Bill Gates,companies own employee who gave the solution to m...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: During
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ience and understanding of the problem. Whenever a companies own employee cannot get a e...
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Line 8, column 302, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a company' or simply 'companies'?
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Line 8, column 338, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 10, column 182, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...to their internal employees and if they fails then they should consult external consu...
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Line 10, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ey should consult external consultants. Thus we cannot conclude whom the company sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2569.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04715127701 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75806702944 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424361493124 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4357137898 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2380952381 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371339927495 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135446705612 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782366100734 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237683937932 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084627128467 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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